Ensemble
I listen to leaves and rain.
Is it melody?
Or silence?
Ensemble
I listen to leaves and rain.
Is it melody?
Or silence?
"You laugh at me because I'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same."
--Jonathan Davis
I admire that you wrote two, but I have to ask which one of the two do you want to count for the contest? I do not think two entries is fair towards the rest.Originally Posted by cacian
Oops sound of course 'sound'. here is two if I may
the sound of music and light
together they string
flashback fast
tick tock the clock rock a mock
to a background broke
it's a prox
Without any form of punctuation, our language would not say "I'm perfect"; it would say "imperfect".
"Access to works of art cannot be defined solely in terms of physical accessibility, since works of art exist only for those who have the means of understanding them."
sure go for the second one
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
bump
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
grindbump
indeed!grind
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Whoops, I'd forgotten.
I am glad that there were a couple more entries, exactly what I was aiming for!
Pendragon, unfortunately your poem did not conform to the topic of sound. It was quite a good piece, but I cannot grade it for the contest.
YesNo, your work was pretty much what I expected beforehand. It's catchy and well composed. Good job!
Cacian, a fast and catchy piece. It sounds nice although the meaning is unclear. That also adds to the mystery.
Barbara, good piece; sounds quite eerie.
Dark Muse, I like how you spoke to somebody else in your poem. The only one of the contestants who did it this way. Nicely done.
Miyako, I find the question that you ask.. striking. A bit hard to try to answer, as well.
Well wow, I find it hard to declare a winner from these.. They are all unique in their own way. I'm going to give this one to YesNo, because I like the wording and the feel to it. I would call Miyako a close second because your question was the most striking.
Well done everyone!
Without any form of punctuation, our language would not say "I'm perfect"; it would say "imperfect".
"Access to works of art cannot be defined solely in terms of physical accessibility, since works of art exist only for those who have the means of understanding them."
Evo thanks!! and YesNo well done
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Thank you, EvoWarrior5! And thanks, cacian!
The next form I've never tried. It is called a Cinqku, but there was a whole thread on it that Paulclem started so there are plenty of examples here: http://www.online-literature.com/for...e-for-December
Deadline: February 14th, Valentine's Day
i missed that requirement, Evo. I need to learn to finish reading instructions! Thanks anyway.
Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
don't we alli missed that requirement, Evo. I need to learn to finish reading instructions! Thanks anyway.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
It looks like I will have to extend this a couple weeks. I'm willing to change the form. Any suggestions?
New deadline is the end of February.
I will nae
hae mair to do
w'these contests
they hae
gane sour...
Pen
Some of us laugh
Some of us cry
Some of us smoke
Some of us lie
But it's all just the way
that we cope with our lives...
valent
short for love
red roses or
dinner date under faith
spoilt
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Pendragon where is your cinqku?
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
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