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    Enchanted Love

    They seized upon one another in the galloping light,
    Breath to breath, whole heartily -
    Clutching the moment.

    It was a prize of joy
    To the young lover's hearts;
    Who compelled each other,
    Complete in the others grasp.

    And that day
    They saw the sun and moon,
    Gasp and overflow
    With wonder.

    And being greeted by doves
    They incarnated as one,
    Aroused by the mystery of love.
    shad·ow ing

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    I am for the romantic cheesy factor of your poem. Like it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    I am for the romantic cheesy factor of your poem. Like it!
    Thanks Buh4Bee. I know some are non too pleased with it, but as they say, they don't pay the rent.
    shad·ow ing

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    Whatever, keep the faith... Keep shadowing, if only in your dreams.

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