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    I've had this idea for some time but never settled on a format until now.

    Prologue -

    KJV Judges 9:8-15:

    8 "The trees went forth on a time to anoint a king over them; and they said unto the olive tree, Reign thou over us.
    9 But the olive tree said unto them, Should I leave my fatness, wherewith by me they honour God and man, and go to be promoted over the trees?
    10 And the trees said to the fig tree, Come thou, and reign over us.
    11 But the fig tree said unto them, Should I forsake my sweetness, and my good fruit, and go to be promoted over the trees?
    12 Then said the trees unto the vine, Come thou, and reign over us.
    13 And the vine said unto them, Should I leave my wine, which cheereth God and man, and go to be promoted over the trees?
    14 Then said all the trees unto the bramble, Come thou, and reign over us.
    15 And the bramble said unto the trees, If in truth ye anoint me king over you, then come and put your trust in my shadow: and if not, let fire come out of the bramble, and devour the cedars of Lebanon."


    The Poem -

    {ref: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Petrarchan_sonnet meter: ABBAABBA followed by "...in Italian sonnets in English... c d d c e e and c d c d e e are also used."}

    A New King

    Preparations for a new king were made
    For rulers should never be unrighteous
    As the bramble was wont; nor covetous
    Like unto the vine, fig, and olive bade
    But whom amongst all the kingdom is staid ?
    All bowed heads as if the wind boisterous
    Solemn in prayer, to Him, of Holiness
    Prepared hearts to what the Spirit conveyed

    Whereby a willow wizened much in years
    Whose time was spent wholly upon God's course
    Was chosen o'er all; all rejoiced with tears
    Celebrating; quaffing from Shiloh's source
    Unto the Lord become they consecrate
    Their covenants, ye, ever consummate

    3/14/2013


    Epilogue -

    King David seeks to battle the Philistines again:

    2 Samuel 5:23-25:

    23 "And when David inquired of the Lord, he said, Thou shalt not go up; but fetch a compass behind them, and come upon them over against the mulberry trees.
    24 And let it be, when thou hearest the sound of a going in the tops of the mulberry trees, that then thou shalt bestir thyself: for then shall the Lord go out before thee, to smite the host of the Philistines.
    25 And David did so, as the Lord had commanded him; and smote the Philistines from Geba until thou come to Gazer."

    Absalom, King David's son, seeks to battle against David for the Kingdom:

    2 Samuel 18:6-10, 14-17, 33

    6 "So the people went out into the field against Israel: and the battle was in the wood of Ephraim;
    7 Where the people of Israel were slain before the servants of David, and there was there a great slaughter that day of twenty thousand men.
    8 For the battle was there scattered over the face of all the country: and the wood devoured more people that day than the sword devoured.
    9 And Absalom met the servants of David. And Absalom rode upon a mule, and the mule went under the thick boughs of a great oak, and his head caught hold of the oak, and he was taken up between the heaven and the earth; and the mule that was under him went away.
    10 And a certain man saw it, and told Joab, and said, Behold, I saw Absalom hanged in an oak."
    ...
    14 "Then said Joab, I may not tarry thus with thee. And he took three darts in his hand, and thrust them through the heart of Absalom, while he was yet alive in the midst of the oak.
    15 And ten young men that bare Joab’s armour compassed about and smote Absalom, and slew him.
    16 And Joab blew the trumpet, and the people returned from pursuing after Israel: for Joab held back the people.
    17 And they took Absalom, and cast him into a great pit in the wood, and laid a very great heap of stones upon him: and all Israel fled every one to his tent.
    ...
    33 And the king was much moved, and went up to the chamber over the gate, and wept: and as he went, thus he said, O my son Absalom, my son, my son Absalom! would God I had died for thee, O Absalom, my son, my son!"

    2 Samuel 23: 1-5:

    1 "Now these be the last words of David. David the son of Jesse said, and the man who was raised up on high, the anointed of the God of Jacob, and the sweet psalmist of Israel, said,
    2 The Spirit of the Lord spake by me, and his word was in my tongue.
    3 The God of Israel said, the Rock of Israel spake to me, He that ruleth over men must be just, ruling in the fear of God.
    4 And he shall be as the light of the morning, when the sun riseth, even a morning without clouds; as the tender grass springing out of the earth by clear shining after rain.
    5 Although my house be not so with God; yet he hath made with me an everlasting covenant, ordered in all things, and sure: for this is all my salvation, and all my desire, although he make it not to grow."



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    Taking both poems into consideration, you're up, YesNo! And Tailor, nice sonnet! Winner is YesNo!
    Some of us laugh
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    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Thanks, Pendragon! The next form will be a limerick.

    Deadline: April 14th, a month from now.

    Here's a link for examples: http://www.webexhibits.org/poetry/ex..._examples.html

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    My Bawdy Limerick ^_^

    A virgin to limericks was Mel
    She wanted to try one, don't tell
    She unbuttoned her wit
    Bared her unholy writ
    Now her limerick's exposed, oh well
    Last edited by Melanie; 03-18-2013 at 03:46 AM.
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    When a fellow like me gets the blues
    I like to go to bed and just snooze
    Some say "Get your tail out of there
    But they had better beware
    Of the language I can use if I choose!
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    It is time to judge this contest!

    Melanie: I liked the part about unbuttoning your wit.

    Pendragon: I liked the part about the kind of language one could be subjected to.

    They are both good and funny which is what really counts. I will call you both winners, but assign to Melanie the task to come up with the next form.

    Congratulations, Melanie!

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    Thank you YesNo!!...that was so much fun to do. I have to do some homework and then I'll return asap with a new form....be right back!
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    Your next poetry form is...

    Triolet
    A poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

    DEADLINE: May 7

    Two Examples:

    In Mourning Black
    In response to "All in Green" by e.e. cummings

    Fair maid, clad all in mourning black
    Rides off upon her golden steed.
    A mocking gesture: heart she lack'd.
    Fair maid, clad all in mourning black,
    Sheds not a tear and turns her back
    With no regrets for wicked deeds.
    Fair maid, clad all in mourning black,
    Rides off upon her golden steed.

    Copyright © 2003 Dendrobia


    Mourning Twilight
    In response triolet to James Joyce "She Weeps Over Rahoon"

    Embrace twilight and bid farewell
    to passion's warmth and sweet caress.
    A grave's prepared where she will dwell
    embrace twilight and bid farewell.
    O hear the mourning of her bell
    that tolls for sorrows you supress
    embrace twilight and bid farewell
    to passion's warmth and sweet caress.

    Copyright © 2003 Mary Ellen Clark
    Last edited by Melanie; 04-23-2013 at 07:53 AM.
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    For Boston

    Fret thee not when evil prevails
    When terror reigns and the Nation mourns
    A Greater power in our heart dwells
    Fret thee not when evil prevails
    In our darkest hours love and patriotism avails
    The graces that the terrorists hold in scorn
    Fret thee not when evil prevails
    When terror reigns and the Nation mourns...

    Pendragon
    (C) 4/17/2013
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Maya Blue

    They painted him with Maya blue
    Then tore from him his beating heart.
    Blue waters work on red blood, too.
    They painted him with Maya blue.
    Chaac's fury lets the rains renew
    The greens of life through deadly art.
    They painted him with Maya blue
    Then tore from him his beating heart.

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    Night Child

    Night child whisper in my ear
    sing the stars down from the sky,
    while the world sleeps there is nothing to fear,
    night child whisper in my ear
    take my hand and lead me away from here
    awaken the dreamer's eye,
    night child whisper in my ear
    sing the stars down from the sky

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dark Muse View Post
    Night Child

    Night child whisper in my ear
    sing the stars down from the sky,
    while the world sleeps there is nothing to fear,
    night child whisper in my ear
    take my hand and lead me away from here
    awaken the dreamer's eye,
    night child whisper in my ear
    sing the stars down from the sky
    I really like this. Very cool.
    While the truncheon may be used
    in lieu of conversation,
    words will always retain their power.
    Words offer the means to meaning,
    and for those who will listen,
    the enunciation of truth.

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    Just a reminder that your Triolets for the Form Poetry Contest are due May 7th
    Live in the sunshine. Swim in the sea. Drink the wild air ~Ralph Waldo Emerson

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    Quote Originally Posted by Melanie View Post
    Your next poetry form is...

    Triolet
    A poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

    DEADLINE: May 7

    Two Examples:

    In Mourning Black
    In response to "All in Green" by e.e. cummings

    Fair maid, clad all in mourning black
    Rides off upon her golden steed.
    A mocking gesture: heart she lack'd.
    Fair maid, clad all in mourning black,
    Sheds not a tear and turns her back
    With no regrets for wicked deeds.
    Fair maid, clad all in mourning black,
    Rides off upon her golden steed.

    Copyright © 2003 Dendrobia


    Mourning Twilight
    In response triolet to James Joyce "She Weeps Over Rahoon"

    Embrace twilight and bid farewell
    to passion's warmth and sweet caress.
    A grave's prepared where she will dwell
    embrace twilight and bid farewell.
    O hear the mourning of her bell
    that tolls for sorrows you supress
    embrace twilight and bid farewell
    to passion's warmth and sweet caress.

    Copyright © 2003 Mary Ellen Clark
    My skills are lacking when it comes to typing poetry that requires a strict form/rhyming scheme. I'll try my best though.

    The Masturbator
    by Adol09

    I, a mere vessel of pure-rought flesh,
    trick'd by wind to greet sin's shore,
    Fear was the grain I strived to thresh
    I, a mere vessel of pure-rought flesh
    My soul rusted from iron mesh,
    My youth, now a remnant of lore
    I, a mere vessel of pure-rought flesh,
    trick'd by wind to greet sin's shore
    My hide hides the heart inside

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    Today is the last day for your Triolet Poem entries (5/7). The contest will close at midnight and the winner announced tomorrow (5/8).
    Live in the sunshine. Swim in the sea. Drink the wild air ~Ralph Waldo Emerson

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