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    Do you?

    You see, you can just close the door behind you.
    I know you will not think, with the steps going away
    that I'd be inside...digging my toes in the ground
    while you move towards something, anything,
    away from the door you close.
    You know the sky will still follow you, for it cannot end
    behind your ankle
    the road will not waver beneath
    and someone will amuse you enough outside
    you will forget you have closed a room
    with me in it
    with me sitting in the middle of it
    where you are willing to leave me now,
    I just wanted to know...
    do you want to close it?

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    Wow! Such a small thing that we never care about. Beautifully written!
    Being taken literally, is like being sent to hell LITERALLY.

    “It is what you read when you don't have to that determines what you will be when you can't help it.”
    ― Oscar Wilde

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    Quote Originally Posted by dark desire View Post
    Wow! Such a small thing that we never care about. Beautifully written!
    I thank you with much happiness!..

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    Little Gal... Your words written here ring true in so many ways we cannot count ...Is it your own poem ???

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    Beautifully crafted

    Quote Originally Posted by louisgeorge View Post
    Little Gal... Your words written here ring true in so many ways we cannot count ...Is it your own poem ???
    I am sure it's the poet's own words and that is why it comes out to be so effective.

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    Quote Originally Posted by louisgeorge View Post
    Little Gal... Your words written here ring true in so many ways we cannot count ...Is it your own poem ???
    Thank You, Yes I have written it...

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    Good stuff, little gal: the question.

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    Quote Originally Posted by cafolini View Post
    Good stuff, little gal: the question.
    Thank You!

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