Hey welcome to the conversation Climber. I'm glad you liked the story and D.H. Lawrence. He really is a great short story writer. I'm also glad you pushed the conversation to the climax. I've been meaning to, but some personal issues have really preoccupied me lately. Let me see if I can respond to some of your thoughts.
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islandclimber
Well, I read The Blind Man, seeing as that appears to be what you are discussing at the moment... and I have to say I quite liked it... Lawrence does seem to almost lose himself inside the characters at times and it is something I love in a writer (explaining my love for Dostoevsky), so if you all don't mind and have space for another lost soul wandering aimlessly on a literary highway, could I please, please join the discussion!:D
Yes, the more one reads Lawrence the more one finds this uncanny ability he has to get into the consciousness, and though I hate this term, the unconsciousness of the key characters.
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I found the gulf between Maurice and Isabel to be quite interesting... it seems as though the nearness necessitated by his blindness and their ensuing failure to retain friendship with anyone else, it seems it only drives a further wedge between them on another level... It is almost as though they strive too hard to retain and keep the intense passion burning, as though they, almost to an insincere and faked, degree are only interested in one another and all else bores them, or at least they seem to try and convince themselves to make up for possible shortcomings... or so i found...
Are you saying the nearness between the married couple drives a wedge between them? My interpretation has been that they are quite satisfied with each other and the relationship but that the outside world seems to intrude. But I think that requires some modification which I think your observation suggests. It's like they have done that (be happy with each other) so what's next? It's been a year or so, now what? They as a couple need to do something else because they can't remain static. Human longings take over, although I suspect that maurice would be quite happy in his elemnt if he were left alone. But he's not alone, he's married and linked with Isabel and as a couple they can't just remain static.
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But the problem I found for them, is that Maurice seems unable to relate to Isabel in a physical/visceral sense any longer
I'm not sure I see that. Where in the text do you think that's suggested? He's certainly has impregnated her, so they have intimacy.
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and Isabel seems to be always wondering if there is something deeper inside Maurice that is hidden from even her, inaccessible to all...
That I completely agree with. It's that other world consciousness that Maurice has.
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and the biggest issue in all this is that Maurice is more of a corporeal nature sort, whereas Isabel is more of strength of mind, explaining her friendship with Bertie and her sometimes disillusionment with the slow nature of Maurice... But I found Maurice, now blind cannot express his thoughts and feelings, and their moments of intense happiness are those when he does not have to... but being blind he cannot depend on this any longer, and he broods as to whether he can make her happy, whether she is sad with him, and that explains why he asks Bertie at the end... and Isabel knows he is constantly brooding and somewhat melancholy outside of their moments of being completely alone with the passion of viscerality, but she cannot understand it, cannot relate, cannot comprehend this, for Maurice cannot let it out, is unable to explain, and she, seems unable to search his depths for it, maybe due to the fact she can no longer look into his eyes... they seem lost with each other when others are around, or when thinking of what they are doing to one another, it is only when they let go of all this, and allow passion to rule that they are happy and content with one another, and can think of other as such as well...
I think this has been discussed and we pretty much agree.
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the climax, I found to be Bertie's hands held to Maurice's eyes... It is quite a powerful scene.. Maurice has brought Bertie into an intimacy no one else, besides Isabel, and maybe not even the same with Isabel, but no one else has seen or felt, or known... He has made Bertie a lover of sorts, and Bertie is unable to handle this intimacy, it almost destroys him... in a sense it does... but on the contrary it rejuvenates Maurice, it allows him to relate again to someone, and I believe allows him to draw closer to Isabel and relax his grip on melancholy brooding on her happiness... and all this because he cannot realize Bertie's reaction of dread.. though you would think he would feel it... hmmm... maybe he does but it is irrelevant to him, he loves him with friendship all the same, having opened himself up in the only way he knows, the physical body... and now he knows Bertie is okay... he isn't the aloof, ironical, somewhat superior scotsman he had thought... For even I found Bertie's questioning about
Completely agree. When I get home tonight (I'm at work now) hopefully I'll have time to go through that climax scene and pull out further thoughts.
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I found that to be slightly offensive, not awful, definitely not malignant or on purpose, but I believe it would have bothered and offended Maurice
What is it you find offensive?
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and then Bertie continues with it at Isabel when Maurice leaves... and I think he doesn't understand it for neither can explain, Maurice knows it, Isabel sense it but can't understand it, and Bertie feels the power of it, through the new intimacy at the end... his reserve has been cracked and not by a woman... but by a blind man, he feels that something else and his "insane reserve" wilts against its power... he is helpless, and his self in that sense is destroyed... whereas Maurice is elated by knowing someone else can feel it... and Isabel is torn between the two.. the elation of Maurice, and the destruction of Bertie...
Yes I wanted to bring this out about Bertie. Why is he destroyed by this simple exchange? His identity rests soley on a mental consciousness, and the touch with this other worlld, this blood consciousness, this world that animals reside in, is as repelant as oil and water. This contact aniliates (sp?) his very identity. While Maurice enlarges his world by the contact, Bertie shrinks from it.
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Lastly I do believe Bertie is homosexual, though I could be entirely out in left field here, but I believe it is implied...
Not at all out of field. The story behind the story is that Bertie is modeled on Bertram Russell, the philosopher, who at one point was friends with Lawrence, and which they had a famous break. Lawrence realized Russell was pure mental consciousness (especially the type of philosophy Russell was involved with) and was removed from tangible real life, and one who complete doesn't grasp what Lawrence referred to as blood consciousness.
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which is why it is the man who cracks his mollusk shell, and melts away his reserve, and he is terrified of this intimacy because of it... I believe it is hinted at all the way to this point, with all the comments about his inability to be anything but a friend of women, and the end clinches it..
Can you elaborate on that? I've wondered why Bertie is incapeable of intimacy and it's linked by implication to his homosexuality. Homosexuality creeps into a number of Lawrence's works and some critics have thought he was a closet homosexual or a repressed homosexual. My reading of Lawrence is that he isn't, but i guess it's a contrversy. I think people confuse our current understanding of homosexuality with whatever notion Lawrence had of it. I think Lawrence has a particualr understanding of homosexuality in this story, and i'm not sure I know what it is. For instance, Maurice gets a sort of pleasure out of this exchange, and we know he's not homosexual.