Oh, so sorry Janine and Laind!
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Oh, so sorry Janine and Laind!
Well, I think you messed up - you used my first line and not my last line. I will go from here using your last line since I am middle-agedQuote:
Originally Posted by dramasnot6
Crushed with middle age
She bend to her endless woe
Alone and forlorn
oh, no i didnt accidentally use your first line. we must have been creating our haikus simultaneously, and i posted a couple minutes later. i do that fairly often...i probably take way too much time writing one haiku that i dont press refresh to see if anyone has already written for that one. But thanks for keeping mine!!
Beautfil haiku by the way
Alone and forlorn
Left to scream at concrete walls
Feelings like a leech
Thanks for the compliment, and BTW I love your Avatar. I still can't decide on one. I think that has happened to me before on other threads - posting same time as someone else. I try to do the haiku spontaneously but I am slow too.
Feelings like a leech
I cling to the stem
Life circles round me
Nite all ...yawn.....fad i n g a w a y
correct me if I'm wrong, but I do think that last line is 6 syllabels.Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
Anyway rock on
Life circles around me
Labeled ego speaks loudly
Thats so last season!
yea, it is 6. ah well, we all had messy syllables as begginers.
Thats so last season!
Shopaholic clarifies
But could i care less?
hehe...a felt like making one a bit blunt and unsophisticated for once
Yes indeed you are. :thumbs_up I'm so very proud. ;) :p Maybe a good way to do it would be just to copy and paste the instructions found on the first post in this thread?Quote:
Originally Posted by Laindessiel
But could I care less?
Not even if my friend was
Tickling my rib cage.
Hey ShoutGrace, you're here! :wave: Hello!:)
Tickling my rib cage
To force humour out of me
Defy gravity
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sorry, I am really a Haiku Failure Personified but I wanna say hello to ShoutGrace..:)
Quote:
Originally Posted by toni
"The only bad haiku is the one not written." ;) :D How are you toni?
Defy gravity
Lets get these space suits on and
Have some weightless sex.
I am fine, now that I saw me fwend.:D
Have some wightless sex
Some bottled wine and crupmets
Time will transport us
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Question! ShoutGrace's age is a mystery..
If you don't mind me asking,
Are you 20-ish 30-ish 40-ish or 50-ish?
It's not that I don't mind your asking, it's just that I don't like to think of myself as an "ish." :D
Time will transport us
Back to the dissolution
Of our former love.
Of our former love
So tragic I remember
spitting on dark holes
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LOL.
Okay, Im gonna ask again, are you in your twenties, thirties fourties or fifties?
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Your haikus are soo Romantic, you know..:)
Well, I try my best :) . . . I don't want to be tricky or anything, but I'm sure you can get a gist of my age from reading posts of mine. Maybe someday I'll tell you in a PM.
Spitting on dark holes
Watching the sun set over
The hulking sand dunes.