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It all gets misty,
your hunch was right.
Tossing and turning,
in bed at night.

How wrong you were,
but how you were deceived.
You've figured it out,
but what have you achieved?

You feared the worst,
not bad enough,
Live with it,
the verdict's tough.

The swirling colours,
stop and die.
Strange what happens,
after a lie.
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  1. Heathcliff's Avatar
  2. Maximilianus's Avatar
    Wow, how powerful!

    Wow! .... Gee! .... My!
  3. qimissung's Avatar
    `````````````````````````````````````````````````` ``````very astute, for one so young.
  4. Maryd.'s Avatar
    Oh, my girl, I not only take my hat off to you but a standing ovation is due here. Well done. Mwah.
  5. Heathcliff's Avatar
    Yer, thanks.

    I'll write another one next time someting exciting happens.
  6. Maximilianus's Avatar
    We'll be waiting
  7. DanielBenoit's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Heathcliff
    Yer, thanks.

    I'll write another one next time someting exciting happens.
    Lol, for me inspiration comes when nothing exciting happens and I am drowned in my melancholy. The happy man is one who is not a poet.

    Excellent poem. Very rhytmic and simple.
  8. toni's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by DanielBenoit
    Lol, for me inspiration comes when nothing exciting happens and I am drowned in my melancholy. The happy man is one who is not a poet.
    Couldn't agree more. My best poems (well, in my opinion) are the ones written when I am in my most depressive state.
  9. Heathcliff's Avatar
    Yup, pretty much, that is me in a bad mood.

    Yer... Melancholy. Everyone seems to have a lot of that.

    I still don't think my poems are very good, or not great, but I must be doing something right.
  10. stephofthenight's Avatar
    simply fantastic.