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Foxtrot's Theories

Yep... another one.

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Not yet has a day gone by,
when I haven't seen your darling smile.
I haven't seen you yet,
though I do, once in a while.

You are the winter's breeze,
the tingles in my spine.
You are the essence of the leaves,
you're the sweetness of the wine.

Full of mystery and wonder,
though still of a child's heart.
You're the apple of my eye,
but what splits my soul apart.

Would you call it worship,
the way I cherish you?
Perhaps it's just a fantasy,
the thought of me and you.

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Don't you just love the 'check messages' button?
There is my inspiration.
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  1. Virgil's Avatar
    Heathcliff, you are impressing the heck out of me. That's really good. You handle the language and the form really well.
  2. Maryd.'s Avatar
    Love it girlie... The last stanza really catches the moment. Well done. Mwah.
  3. Heathcliff's Avatar
    Thanks Virg, thanks Mum.

    I like this one.

    I love the check messages button.
  4. toni's Avatar
    I like this very much. Very well-composed and sincere.
  5. Heathcliff's Avatar
    Thank you!!

    I write from somewhere down deep.
    I don't think my heart, but somewhere nonetheless.