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Mohammad Ahmad
11-01-2017, 03:44 AM
Stooped and consulted
As an arrow fitting to one's conscience
Once the march has to be involved
To feel one's desire walk in a forest
Throbbing midst heart's membrane
To cure those dead souls be inspired
And the remote sound goes into rimose gapes
As a small child in his first elementary classes
Hunching on study to be an old scholar
And the mere hunt becomes as a mare "well-born"
In a tropical area when air is vigorously warmed
As those bigamously twins to south Africa
When virgins' nipples become milky
Hence the intermarried souls tear up all thickness
And the black hair grow up to be a blond tree
Danik 2016
11-01-2017, 07:33 AM
I confess my difficulty with this poem, Mohammad, but it is nice "hearing from you" again.
Mohammad Ahmad
11-01-2017, 12:06 PM
I confess my difficulty with this poem, Mohammad, but it is nice "hearing from you" again.
Thank you Danik to come and read
I know it has difficult senses to be understood but let it difficult, why do we write simple poems?
I know that I made it complicated images inside images, but it is not a completed poem, I know
However, let me tell you for what I mentioned African virgins to establish a metaphor " And the black hair grow up to be a blond tree" here I referred to tortured people everywhere to give shine symbolic future so that history will submit to nations including poor people as simple farmers, workers just to imagine that life it has a happy hart even if the black shadow overlapped all atmosphere covering it with a thick mass but still there is hope inside or outside. I have many stories about Africa and the last books I read , "THE AFRICAN QUEEN", African presence in early Asia ... this last one history indeed.
Danik 2016
11-01-2017, 08:28 PM
I think I understand, Mohammad. You refer to an optimistic outcome of suffering and domination.
YesNo
11-02-2017, 10:00 AM
Glad to see you back, Mohammad. The last line with black and blond still has me puzzled, but it doesn't matter.
Mohammad Ahmad
11-03-2017, 06:56 AM
Glad to see you back, Mohammad. The last line with black and blond still has me puzzled, but it doesn't matter.
Welcome YesNo
I think it touches you as American. In addition, I think all generations are related to one whether at Africa or anywhere else. Since likely are washed so that the original nature will give out or express its contrasted feature. However, they are just thoughts or colors I want to mix them to be one. Of course the White is the good result or the physical natural ordinary result for bodies, but a blonder to be distinguished or acceptable as most American or any other different nation in the world having the blonder hair.
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