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Mohammad Ahmad
01-24-2014, 12:04 PM
My gipsy lover
Drowsy as a soft flower
Nodding in her howdah
She reluctantly follows her cameleer
Decamped away and the stars is their guider.
As a princess with her maid of honour
When she kneels to ground
You would smell a good odor
Often she wears a silken head cover
And the jewels being as stars sewn in zipper
Her cheeks flash and thunder
Like a sky is about to shower
Her tall is as a lofty tower
Magnetic is her slumber
In her eyes, there is a magic power
When she talks to me
When she gazes at me
Her eyes fill up with pleasure
At every hour
She hums as a tuner
Most days of winter
In front of her crimson tent
She often spins her spindle as a spider
A slim girl of a good temper
but at summer
She is quiet heroically but sober
And always she goes to the river
To swim and pamper
Whereto would I say?
To whom am I being humorer?

Delta40
01-24-2014, 12:56 PM
The English is tangled in places but the romantic musings could be felt

Mohammad Ahmad
01-24-2014, 02:58 PM
The English is tangled in places but the romantic musings could be felt
Thank u dear Delta for your visit.
Is it an enjoyable poem or not?
I think it tickles your inner.
Everyday you shall see a new theme of mine.