lyrical

[cacian]

i don't believe
it's miracle
to speak about
the physical
atonement is
possible
when visible is
missible
soluble lies
lyrical
minus the mythical
what hades
maybes
chronical says peace
to darkened rays
the feast
but when precision
says is
attention pays
fees
prestigious weighs
least
plausible may
ease.

[Laura-Lee]

I must
make you aware
I've never been
one to care
for poety
in stages
written only in one
place on pages

In the past it has always seemed to me like a trick to keep us from noticing that something isn't written very well. But I must eat my words. There's a first time for everything.

This is a well done poem. You've "converted" me. (now if someone could convince me that a poem is still a poem, even if it doen't rhyme.):frown2:
Love L-L

[cacian]

Laura-Lee thank you so much for reading and feedback :)
I like your little piece ' A First time to eat' it is very swift and to the point ;)