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ShadowsCool
04-16-2013, 07:37 PM
They seized upon one another in the galloping light,
Breath to breath, whole heartily -
Clutching the moment.

It was a prize of joy
To the young lover's hearts;
Who compelled each other,
Complete in the others grasp.

And that day
They saw the sun and moon,
Gasp and overflow
With wonder.

And being greeted by doves
They incarnated as one,
Aroused by the mystery of love.

Buh4Bee
04-16-2013, 08:06 PM
I am for the romantic cheesy factor of your poem. Like it!

ShadowsCool
04-16-2013, 08:52 PM
I am for the romantic cheesy factor of your poem. Like it!

Thanks Buh4Bee. I know some are non too pleased with it, but as they say, they don't pay the rent.

Buh4Bee
04-16-2013, 09:29 PM
Whatever, keep the faith... Keep shadowing, if only in your dreams.