Muddy

[Shaman_Raman]

Muddy muddy
Unclear and puggy,
Sometimes pretty
otherwise ugly,
Clean ups
a birch,
Tediously scrubbing,
Clear for a little
Soon back to fuggy,
Give up, it's useless
Maddening and bloody,
Dirt wastes water,
Making it muddy.

[Shaman_Raman]

Really? Birch? Dam auto correct, can't catch it every time.

[Delta40]

You can edit but I think a bit o birch would be most effective!

[cacian]

Haha Shaman this is a cool poem because it reminds me of someone. It is just the right words for it ;)
Muddy sounds like mardy and then french for Mardi which is tuesday to you and me.

[Shaman_Raman]

Casian, there's an irony here that will keep me humored for awhile, lol.

[Shaman_Raman]

You can edit but I think a bit o birch would be most effective!

I like it!