View Full Version : Gobstopper
Delta40
07-11-2012, 12:36 PM
And should I ever see
the child in my own eyes
and realise how beliefs
endure far longer than facts,
I will blunder through
the ravaged village
of my failures,
searching for that sweet shop
to cash in the vouchers
of my experience.
Only in this extreme
shall I be so resolute.
Hawkman
07-11-2012, 08:04 PM
Harden is the wrong word here Delta. It describes the process of becoming hard. In context, what you want to say, is stay hard. "Endure" would be a reasonable substitute.
Live and be well - H
Delta40
07-11-2012, 08:09 PM
Thanks Hawk. Much appreciated.
MystyrMystyry
07-11-2012, 11:46 PM
This is good Delta - I thought the part about cashing in the vouchers was particularly inspired :)
Revolte
07-11-2012, 11:58 PM
This is good Delta - I thought the part about cashing in the vouchers was particularly inspired :)
I agree with ^
Bar22do
07-12-2012, 04:06 PM
we should always be aware of the fact
beliefs
endure far longer than facts
this is so well said, here, Delta.
Delta40
07-12-2012, 04:45 PM
This one should have been titled Everlasting Gobstopper!
Powered by vBulletin® Version 4.2.2 Copyright © 2026 vBulletin Solutions, Inc. All rights reserved.