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serveitup61
04-07-2012, 11:02 PM
Mama had always said,
“One day you’ll get it,
Why you must obey me.”

Mumbling, grumbling, griping,
I find myself doing her job,
Washing her dishes, running her errands.


I’m meant to do as she says,
Hanging off her every word.
A subservient ant to an unseen queen.

I hop to every command,
Each more inconvenient than the last,
And I’m bitter and annoyed and…

Years later. I look down into the eyes
Of that little old woman who treated me so,
Grateful for the chance to obey her every word.

ShadowsCool
04-07-2012, 11:36 PM
I like the way you weave the poem and the nice ending. Beautiful job.