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Jack of Hearts
03-28-2012, 09:14 AM
i am a blue robin.
mama's frying pan burns me when she flips homefries.
the way the sunshine falls in through the blinds
is breaking my heart.
i can hear the breathing wind,
see it push the banded leaves apart.

where had breakfast gone?
when i gaze into the dark
where the ceiling should be,
the starched sheets drawn tight under me
and shut your eyes, a lullaby
will make everything alright

for a blue robin.

hallaig
03-28-2012, 10:04 AM
No sure about the blue robin which seems to introduce a wilful element of obscurity but I like the immediacy of this, the true slice of consciousness.