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ShadowsCool
02-07-2012, 11:55 PM
The darkness grasp the light that never should be,
A tunnel that flickers inside absurdity.
What's done is done,
There is no going back
From the sill a shadow of one hung,
That is perfectly me!
With terrified bulging eyes,
But not for deaths disgrace.
This is where I longed to be,
Stilled by the widows dream
Crying inside for release.
That was perfectly me!
How absurd it must be to find me,
With a bead of light through my pale claws,
Having hungered for peace,
While the restless wind leaps
To steal my dreams.

cacian
02-08-2012, 02:47 AM
ShadowsCool this is a great piece!!
I enjoyed these lines

The darkness grasp the light that never should be,
A tunnel that flickers inside absurdity.
What's done is done,
There is no going back
From the sill a shadow of one hung,
That is perfectly me

and I like the repeat of

That is perfectly me

it gives it a musical ring.

ShadowsCool
02-08-2012, 10:44 AM
ShadowsCool this is a great piece!!
I enjoyed these lines

The darkness grasp the light that never should be,
A tunnel that flickers inside absurdity.
What's done is done,
There is no going back
From the sill a shadow of one hung,
That is perfectly me


Thanks cacian. I'm glad you liked it :)