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NikolaiI
10-21-2010, 04:34 PM
relax,
peace,
there's no where you can't go.
once you wake up and join the others,
then you can begin your play.
Jerrybaldy
10-21-2010, 07:30 PM
Hi Nik
did you mean be in your play or begin your play?
Delta40
10-21-2010, 07:47 PM
last line not clear. I like how the poem suggests peace should relax.
NikolaiI
10-21-2010, 08:13 PM
Hi Nik
did you mean be in your play or begin your play?

yep, meant begin. Another typo... this isn't like me. :p

Thanks for the comment.


last line not clear. I like how the poem suggests peace should relax.

ahh... a typo that last line was, sorry :p

thanks for commenting :)
Jerrybaldy
10-21-2010, 08:19 PM
It now reminds me of John Lennon, which is praise from me, but I remember Delta not being a fan, so she will have her own take on it :)
Delta40
10-21-2010, 08:31 PM
Definitely not Lennon! More Cat Stevens
tailor STATELY
10-22-2010, 01:36 AM
Very interesting. So simple yet conveying so much.

I might hazard an interpretation:
From the meditative state, one of pure peace and harmony, awakening with the innocence of a child - as others have attained in a spiritual plane of existence (a nowhere relative to the mortal plane) teachable and unfettered by earthly desires or bounds.

Well done.

Sincerely,
tailor STATELY
PrinceMyshkin
10-22-2010, 10:28 AM
Bump.
NikolaiI
10-22-2010, 11:51 AM
Thanks so much Tailor. :)

And thanks for the bump, Prince :p