Nowhere

[NikolaiI]

relax,
peace,
there's no where you can't go.
once you wake up and join the others,
then you can begin your play.

[Jerrybaldy]

Hi Nik
did you mean be in your play or begin your play?

[Delta40]

last line not clear. I like how the poem suggests peace should relax.

[NikolaiI]

Hi Nik
did you mean be in your play or begin your play?

yep, meant begin. Another typo... this isn't like me. :p

Thanks for the comment.


last line not clear. I like how the poem suggests peace should relax.

ahh... a typo that last line was, sorry :p

thanks for commenting :)

[Jerrybaldy]

It now reminds me of John Lennon, which is praise from me, but I remember Delta not being a fan, so she will have her own take on it :)

[Delta40]

Definitely not Lennon! More Cat Stevens

[tailor STATELY]

Very interesting. So simple yet conveying so much.

I might hazard an interpretation:
From the meditative state, one of pure peace and harmony, awakening with the innocence of a child - as others have attained in a spiritual plane of existence (a nowhere relative to the mortal plane) teachable and unfettered by earthly desires or bounds.

Well done.

Sincerely,
tailor STATELY

[PrinceMyshkin]

Bump.

[NikolaiI]

Thanks so much Tailor. :)

And thanks for the bump, Prince :p