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Delta40
09-10-2010, 04:40 PM
His plastic wall clock
ticks as cheaply as it cost
Behind the fibro wall
there is movement
A rat makes its nest
amid the airy hum
of an overused laptop
The roof creaks
as if the structure
were settling down
after a heady friday night
In its attic mind
the house sags at the gutters
slides down the road
shuts its blinds
and curls up in a comfy cul-de-sac

dafydd manton
09-10-2010, 04:42 PM
Your usual superb imagery. I love the way you put the mundane and the ethereal together.

Delta40
09-10-2010, 04:47 PM
I'm an etherdane person. got to join my house and get some sleep...

dafydd manton
09-10-2010, 04:51 PM
No snoring - it damages the joists! Night.

Jerrybaldy
09-10-2010, 07:02 PM
homely personification. I am so visiting the ramshackle soon :D

Haunted
09-16-2010, 01:11 AM
Fascinating thought, I really like it.