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Delta40
08-21-2010, 06:23 PM
You're a waste of gas
everything I said
fell on deaf ears
you can't glow orange
to warm my toes
the icy dawn
creeps round your
jet like a triffid
it chokes and stifles
you flicker blue
and wilt at the grate
alas poor heater
I knew him well

Jerrybaldy
08-21-2010, 06:28 PM
prolification.
A triffid reference. Did you watch all tv through my eyes?
your heater. Is there anything that doesnt turn Delta poetic?
I bet you have a good twenty lines in your last toenail clippings :)
Jerry