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Revolte
03-16-2010, 05:09 PM
I cant breath, my knees gone stale
The horror, the horror!
My senses fade, I twitch and tweak
The panic, the panic!

I'm dying, I just know I am
Save me, save me!
I can't cry, I can hardly hear
All is silent, so silent!

I can't see, I'm tunneling in dark
I'm blind, dead blind!
First cold, then burning heat struck
The sweat, hellish sweat!

I'm calming, it's come to a close
That horror, damned horror!
I've changed, from a minute long scare
I'm reborn, I'm reborn!

PrinceMyshkin
03-16-2010, 08:38 PM
is this meant to be a clinical evocation of a panic attack, which comes almost without reason and as mysteriously passes? Otherwise it's hard to make sense of the total reversal in the last verse.

Revolte
03-16-2010, 08:40 PM
is this meant to be a clinical evocation of a panic attack, which comes almost without reason and as mysteriously passes? Otherwise it's hard to make sense of the total reversal in the last verse.

right on the dot. Prior to last night I never had one, I thought about leaving out the last verse but then it wouldnt end the way it ended for myself.

BienvenuJDC
03-16-2010, 08:51 PM
Wow...great description!