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ur_shadow89
12-10-2009, 02:59 PM
My Promise to you my Love...

"I loved you then...
I love you more now...
And I'll love you even better on the days ahead till forever...
This is not a promise that I'm making,
But a promised that I've made...
And I'll do whatever it takes to keep it,
Till my life is through....
Forever I will be loving you..."




Everyday

Everyday before I lay,
I pray for you that you're ok
Amidst the distance that we share
In my thoughts you're always there.

I grieve sometimes cuz I can't be with you
When you needed me just as I needed you
But I'm hoping that my messages will see you through,
To ease your burden and cheer you too.

When you feel alone and nobody cares,
Just think of me and I'll be there,
Holding you... Keeping you...

Every night before I lay,
I thank God for giving me, you...
For having known you,
My bestfriend, my soulmate...
I love you.



Our Journey

"The time we have spent together
was something even more precious than gold,
it was something we've longed for
and I'm glad we did cherish that every moment
and the experience of having you even just for a while
makes my life’s journey worthwhile."

hoope
12-10-2009, 04:20 PM
Oh MAN ! this is so sweeeet.. i loved Everyday most
Our journey has a great meaning in it .. so deep ..

well done

ur_shadow89
12-10-2009, 04:45 PM
Im glad you liked it hoope.. :)

Buh4Bee
12-10-2009, 09:15 PM
The poems are very specific to the person you are writing them too. For this purpose they are lovely. What person wouldn't want to get such sentimental poems? However, as a by-standard, I am not as inspired by their poetic quality.

ur_shadow89
12-11-2009, 05:57 AM
yes, it for a specific person and the quality is not to that upto standard. but anyhow appreciate your comment and reading my poems :)

Buh4Bee
12-11-2009, 10:22 AM
I hope I wasn't being rude, just trying to express my thoughts politely. I see now that you claim to have them as lovely thoughts... this is exactly what they are.