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~Sophia~
11-15-2009, 07:52 AM
Wow, that was quite a ride and there are more than a few lines, moments, aeons of acute streaming artfulness! I'm impressed!

Buh4Bee
11-15-2009, 08:06 AM
epic, worth rereading several times! There has been so much good poetry on the forum this weekend. Really nice!

Delta40
11-15-2009, 08:29 AM
Down down
into the soulless abyss,
into the lightless void
where there is wailing
and gnashing of teeth,
where the witch’s blade
cuts nothing from nothing,
and out of nothing
nothing is re-made.

I especially love this piece