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ampoule
11-13-2009, 09:20 AM
Leaf Sucker

It's Monday.
The leaves were raked to the curb yesterday,
all yellow and piling high.
The air is cool, frost still lingering here and there,
and quiet,
'cept for the distant whirring, slowly getting louder,
The Leaf Sucker, on its way.

Proud of my offering, I wait behind my lace curtains,
the vacuum hose now gulping and swallowing,
I watch,
Three men, bored, disinterested,
One to drive, one to rake, one to conrol the hose,
Not knowing what they do, but their job,
And I forgive them.

The yellow wall, gone now,
I go to my car for work,
Glancing down,
The most gigantic leaf,
I grab it and throw it in the car, locking the doors.
I sneak it into my classroom saying,

"Look! Look at this gigantic leaf!"
I am such a sucker.

ampoule, November Thirteenth, TwoThousandNine

PrinceMyshkin
11-13-2009, 10:30 AM
Beautiful, my friend, with your usual graceful ease, the unforced unfolding of a seemingly pedestrian incident that is elevated by your close observation of it.

Buh4Bee
11-13-2009, 02:08 PM
Awesome! I truly enjoyed this. I'm a leaf sucker too.

AuntShecky
11-13-2009, 02:54 PM
I haven't seen your postings in a while, and this was an especially nice offering from you.

firefangled
11-14-2009, 01:53 AM
I'm so happy to see you posting, Amp. I've missed gems like this one.

ampoule
11-14-2009, 02:21 AM
Thank you. I looked at that leaf today and wished I'd have pressed it!

blazeofglory
11-14-2009, 03:48 AM
This is enigmatic. I enjoy reading it, with good images

~Sophia~
11-14-2009, 05:08 PM
so glad you've "amped it up" again. Marvelous!!!!