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DanBierce
11-06-2009, 01:20 AM
I watch a fly bang, bang
its green butt
against the naked bulb.

"Goofy bastard."
I mutter out loud,

then return to my laptop,
and bang,
bang, away.

firefangled
11-06-2009, 11:03 AM
Add your poem, Dan, to the proof that we are not alone. I loved it.

~Sophia~
11-06-2009, 01:38 PM
I so clearly saw myself in that! I love it too! ROFLMAO

Virgil
11-06-2009, 03:56 PM
:lol: I love it too! Well done. :)

DanBierce
11-06-2009, 08:31 PM
Thanks, guys. Glad you got a laugh outta this.

skib
11-06-2009, 08:41 PM
Reminds me of sitting here on Litnet this past summer while the flies/mosquitoes divebombed my computer screen and actually got thick enough I couldn't see the screen.

MorpheusSandman
11-06-2009, 11:21 PM
Funny but quite profound! I think it wonderfully makes the statement about how easy it is to see the meaninglessness of every life but our own. Just excellent!

cogs
11-08-2009, 11:42 PM
what light can we find to help us disconnect from this self-imposed electronic snare?