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DanBierce
11-06-2009, 01:20 AM
I watch a fly bang, bang
its green butt
against the naked bulb.
"Goofy bastard."
I mutter out loud,
then return to my laptop,
and bang,
bang, away.
firefangled
11-06-2009, 11:03 AM
Add your poem, Dan, to the proof that we are not alone. I loved it.
~Sophia~
11-06-2009, 01:38 PM
I so clearly saw myself in that! I love it too! ROFLMAO
Virgil
11-06-2009, 03:56 PM
:lol: I love it too! Well done. :)
DanBierce
11-06-2009, 08:31 PM
Thanks, guys. Glad you got a laugh outta this.
Reminds me of sitting here on Litnet this past summer while the flies/mosquitoes divebombed my computer screen and actually got thick enough I couldn't see the screen.
MorpheusSandman
11-06-2009, 11:21 PM
Funny but quite profound! I think it wonderfully makes the statement about how easy it is to see the meaninglessness of every life but our own. Just excellent!
what light can we find to help us disconnect from this self-imposed electronic snare?
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