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Alteine
06-12-2009, 04:41 AM
Three sides of the same coin
We'll never change yet I want more
Toss and turn it's still the same
None could ever take the blame

Kiss and tell was never it
Hide and seek left us yearning
Under broad daylight was the thrill
And I was never one to yield

Reverie of the discovery
Nostalgic of the rapture on display
Who was I to take away
When all was open for me to take?

Dancing on senses ablaze
Blurring the lines with scalding intensity
I take it all with eyes of need
With undertones of lust and greed

Three sides of the same coin
We'll never change yet I want more
Toss and turn it's still the same
None could ever take the blame

PrinceMyshkin
06-12-2009, 10:53 AM
Apart from the deeply felt emotions of this piece, how wonderfully you manage the transition from lines that rhyme to ones that don't, allowing the rhyming ones to act as a sort of punctuation or emphasis throughout!

Welcome to this forum and I hope we see more of you.