Love letter to Wispy

[kevinthediltz]

I was not exactly sure where to post this, mods can move it wherever.

It came to my attention lately that a_little_wisp has never recieved a love letter in her entire life. Well I find this unacceptable so I sought to change that
Without further ado:

My dearest Haleigh,
You, my love, are the only one who moves me. You wake me in the morning, you kiss me goodnight. You are the light that shines in my path. Your words are beautiful. Near as beautiful as your face. Oh, your eyes! Those deep green eyes. I feel as if I could swim away in them. I lose myself whenever I gaze at you. All of the world drifts away. The moon will not shine, the sun will not rise, the clouds will not rain, the earth itself will not move, without you by my side. My love is a river, flowing like my fingers through your hair. If every drop of rain, were an ounce of love I had for you, you would be washed away by an endless flood of affection. When you are cold, I will be your blanket. When you are warm, I am the cool breeze. You are the one and only token of my eye. You alone are the seven wonders of my world: your voice, your laugh, your eyes, your smile, your kiss, your touch, and your love. I am an unstoppable force, and you are an unbreakable wall. You complete me. For what is the rain, without two lovers, lips locked?

Love,
Kevin




This written with as much love as possible to a woman I have never met, seen, or talked to other than on this site.
No I am not stalking her.

*edit* also written to be as corny as I could possibly make it.

[Riesa]

darling. incredibly sweet.

I especially like this line:

"no, I am not stalking her" ;)

a lovely gesture, kevin.

[PoeticPassions]

this is wonderful, Kevin... what a beautiful gesture! :)

[a_little_wisp]

ALRIGHT ALRIGHT. This is going to be a duel, is it?

(Kevin, I am torn between laughing my *** off and marrying you right away.) What's a love letter without a love response?

*cracks knuckles*


Kevin, dearest of my heart, body, and soul -

I thought, "Could these words be real?" How could I mean so much to such a man? How can you possibly trust me, who wanders into love like a nocturnal creature, blinded and bedazzled, into daylight, unsure of this new, different, brighter, more beautiful world? How is it that you are so poetic, so calm when the love I have for you rages like a tempest within me, a hurricane of emotions I cannot settle for even one moment to return in fairness to you what you have given to me in such eloquence? Is this madness? This glowing warmth that starts in my fingers, tingling in my joints, crawling into my stomach, twisting, tightening, until suddenly, inexplicable and illogically, I'm soaring -

You're my arthritis - no, hear me out. You're my heartburn. You're the lesson that I never learned that nags at me inside my mind - you're the dream I can't grow out of, you're the dream I'm growing into. You're my wings, you're my rock, you shake the logos from my life, and can't you tell?

You're a sickness.

Because around you, without reason, I can't stop this inner shaking, this earthquake that rips the solid foundations of my life, my reason, my philosophies, out from beneath me. I've never felt like the skin may melt right off my bones, and I've never felt like I'm not in control. And if you continue, if you're being true, I might bolt -

What's more terrifying -

I might want to stay here, to give to you, with trembling hands, a hopeful heart - the heart I've never given to anyone before.

Either way,
Either way -

If you could get beneath my skin you'd know how much I shiver and shake, how much I shudder and quake - if you could see through my eyes, you'd have an idea as to what you are, as to what you do to me.

You steal time from me, for every second of the day there is no thought that you are not apart of. And the dreams I once dreamt, all for myself? They're all yours now. And for a person who needs them like I do, well... it just goes to show, doesn't it?

It just goes to show that -
Without cheapening the words,
For we two, I believe, can make them priceless -

I love you,

Haleigh

[Riesa]

holiness.

um, Kevin, she's too good for you, you better realize that now.

shouldn't this be private?

[PoeticPassions]

You're my arthritis - no, hear me out. You're my heartburn. You're the lesson that I never learned that nags at me inside my mind - you're the dream I can't grow out of, you're the dream I'm growing into. You're my wings, you're my rock, you shake the logos from my life, and can't you tell?




Brilliant!!!

Kevin, she has got you beat. This is a beautiful love letter, wispy! The kind anyone would hope to get someday...

[~Sophia~]

Oh wow. That is probably the sweetest intimation I have ever seen. You really are a gentle man!
also written to be as corny as I could possibly make it. Is there any other kind of love letter? Very cool!

Edit: LOL... didn't see your reply Wispy. You are both too cool!

[kevinthediltz]

Oh no, a battle again?
Wisp, my letter next to yours is equivilent to a fat man pissing on a cat next to a supermodel.
I believe you have me beat, I am flattered. :blush:

[a_little_wisp]

Kevin, that last comment had me - literally - laughing out loud. Good god. *Still laughing!* I think that analogy is a bit extreme, don't you? Hilarious, but extreme.

LOL Throwing in your hat already? NOOO - just kidding. I would never make a guy write two love letters in one night. *Wipe brow* I'm a bit exhausted of love letter writing myself now.

You really do write beautifully, Kevin. You should totally use yours on the next girl who comes along in your life. She'll fall flat on her face in love. I'd call the battle even.

P.S. Thanks PoeticPassions, Riesa, and Sophia for reading!!!

[jon1jt]

I was not exactly sure where to post this, mods can move it wherever.

It came to my attention lately that a_little_wisp has never recieved a love letter in her entire life. Well I find this unacceptable so I sought to change that
Without further ado:

My dearest Haleigh,
You, my love, are the only one who moves me. You wake me in the morning, you kiss me goodnight. You are the light that shines in my path. Your words are beautiful. Near as beautiful as your face. Oh, your eyes! Those deep green eyes. I feel as if I could swim away in them. I lose myself whenever I gaze at you. All of the world drifts away. The moon will not shine, the sun will not rise, the clouds will not rain, the earth itself will not move, without you by my side. My love is a river, flowing like my fingers through your hair. If every drop of rain, were an ounce of love I had for you, you would be washed away by an endless flood of affection. When you are cold, I will be your blanket. When you are warm, I am the cool breeze. You are the one and only token of my eye. You alone are the seven wonders of my world: your voice, your laugh, your eyes, your smile, your kiss, your touch, and your love. I am an unstoppable force, and you are an unbreakable wall. You complete me. For what is the rain, without two lovers, lips locked?

Love,
Kevin




This written with as much love as possible to a woman I have never met, seen, or talked to other than on this site.
No I am not stalking her.

*edit* also written to be as corny as I could possibly make it.

Dude, what about our long talk over in Dori's blog the other night about tatas, booties (cratered and smooth), booze, and most importantly, love? And do you recall what you said at the end of that conversation...that you're going to hold out, and how true love would find you in the end. And here you go with your heart flapping in the wind with, of all things...a love letter! What about the mosh chick?!?? I need to talk to Skibs.

[qimissung]

Oh boy! Another write-off between wisp and kevin! I wait with bated breath! So far it's a dead heat in my opinion. My favorite lines: "For what is the rain without two lovers, lips locked?" That's actually pretty good, Kevin. It's better than 'you complete me.' Where'd you get that drivel? :)

"Your'e my arthritis..." :lol: That is hysterical.

But, wistfully, from a die-hard romantic, maybe you two WILL fall in love for real someday...it could haoppen. Until then, thanks for shedding your creative light on all of us! :D

[skib]

Dude, what about our long talk over in Dori's blog the other night about tatas, booties (cratered and smooth), booze, and most importantly, love? And do you recall what you said at the end of that conversation...that you're going to hold out, and how true love would find you in the end. And here you go with your heart flapping in the wind with, of all things...a love letter! What about the mosh chick?!?? I need to talk to Skibs.

I'm here Jon! What's the question- anything about Kevin, I can answer it!! (whether or not I want to is the question)

[kevinthediltz]

Ok ok. After much thinking. And lots of editing. I have come up with something that is almost worthy to be seen next to wispy's letter.

Uh hum!

Haleigh,
You are the soul beneath my soul. A mighty oak reaches out toward the heavens as I reach for you now, my dear. Your heart, given so fruitfully, I guard in a silver box. As none before have. A thousand miles away, you guard me from my dreams. A scholar you are, as you Wisp me away in your words. The horse to my saddle. The saddle to my frame. You are my foundation.

Oh the feelings that arise! When you are near. My legs do not shake, nay, the earth quakes beneath them, at the sound of your voice. There is no greed, there is no hate, there is no fear, there is no world! When you are beside me. Nothing but the moon, that shines so brightly on our love. Your smile. Oh I would stop the world spinning just to see you smile for an instant. It does not brighten my eye, nay, it burns through me as a fire through a mighty forrest. Your touch, your lightest touch shatters ribs and throws me to the ground. I am at mercy, to your fingers. Your eyes, they are us, my love. Two figures, walking hand and hand through a green field. That laugh you have. It turns me into a child. An infant rather, crying until you giggle. Turning the world upside down. Your kiss lingers on my cheek. Scaring my skin in the shape of your lips. Scaring my thoughts in the shape of your heart. It will never fade.

Your love stops the rain. It opens the sky. It moves the earth. For I am merciless to your will. A slave to you. Lost in your thoughts.

I am your wings, for you are an angel. I am your rock, for you are a mountain. I am a seed, you are the earth itself as I root myself deeper into your arms. You shine on me and give me life and limb as I bloom into a flower for you.

You are simply, as a thousand poems have said, my love.

Am I simply a pawn? A puppet that you control? For you have pulled all the strings. The 5 words you have chosen not to say. Would deal a crushing blow to my life. "I do not love you" the sky would tear open, fire would rain down from the heavens. The earth would open and send me cascading down into the abyss. A nail unto my head. The death of my world.

But you have saved me. For your love is eternal. Both calm and chaos you are in my eye. A demonic drive to adore you.

Nothing will go unsaid, I love you, my dear. For I cannot resist an angel.


Love,
Kevin

[BienvenuJDC]

Man...did you just call her a horse?

[kevinthediltz]

If you know me, you know that thats a compliment. Pure majesty and beauty.
At least I didnt call her a cow.

[Scheherazade]

At least I didnt call her a cow.Ouch.

Now, I am sure Wispy will be grateful for that...

:rolleyes:

[BienvenuJDC]

Actually from your profile pic...I can see that you're right...But I was trying to stir something up...

[kevinthediltz]

I WILL COME TO YOUR HOUSE AND SLIT YOUR THROAT WHILE YOU SLEEP!!!!
Is that what you were looking for? :lol:

[BienvenuJDC]

Not a stir from YOU... From everyone else!!!:rolleyes:

[kevinthediltz]

Oh... :blush:
Well in that case, Im sorry... :(
But to make it up to you, I will fluff your pillow tonight before bed. :D

[Scheherazade]

But to make it up to you, I will fluff your pillow tonight before bed. :DWhile it is under his head or over his face?

:D

[kevinthediltz]

While it is under his head or over his face?

:D

:lol:
That may be the question...

[BienvenuJDC]

LOL...you kill me...(and that was only meant as a figure of speech!!!)

[Janine]

:lol: :lol: :lol: This love letter thread is hilarious - glad you didn't refer to her as a cow, kevin!

[kevinthediltz]

Thank you Janine. Theyre fun to write.
Even if SOME people only find horse like comments in them...

[Scheherazade]

Thank you Janine. Theyre fun to write.
Even if SOME people only find horse like comments in them...He means you, BienvenuJDC... Just in case it was not clear!

:D

[BienvenuJDC]

...did somebody say something?

[Janine]

:lol: It's so entertaining in here I can't pull myself away. Hey, kev, no one ever wrote me a love letter either. :lol:...of course, I would hate to be referred to as any animal...well maybe a kitty might be ok.

[kevinthediltz]

I dont know. I think Im limited to one love letter a day. :lol:

[Janine]

I dont know. I think Im limited to one love letter a day. :lol:

Don't sweat it kev, I think most likely I am old enough to be your mother, maybe even your grandmother. Therefore you're off the hook.....but, then again, if you ever want an older more experienced woman....;):lol:

[BienvenuJDC]

awe...come on kevie...I was hopin' fer one tooooo ;-)

[kevinthediltz]

Man, a couple of love letters and I'm Mr. popluar! Even with the boy-o's. :lol:
Wispy is my internet girl! Did you not read the letters?!?!

[motherhubbard]

Bummer, I was hoping for a little love this way!

Really I keep coming back because of the fat guy and the cat. I almost wet myself over that, twice! I remembered it while I was cooking and laughed until I had to stop cooking and sit down.

[Virgil]

Man, a couple of love letters and I'm Mr. popluar! Even with the boy-o's. :lol:
Wispy is my internet girl! Did you not read the letters?!?!


The girls love that mushy crap. :D All of a sudden you're seen as a sensitive man. ;)

[Janine]

The girls love that mushy crap. :D All of a sudden you're seen as a sensitive man. ;)

Virgil, you may have to step down in popularity and let kevin take the lead now; the younger generation takes the garland; that he-man stuff doesn't cut it anymore. He is quite the man about town on Litnet now. All the girls are google-eyed over him with his flowerly prose, but only one holds his heart - Wispy! isn't that right, kev? :D

[kevinthediltz]

If you say so. The student overpasses the master it seems? Muahahaha!!!!
Yes, I belive I have won wispy's heart with my letter. And she has yet to read the second. Unfortunately we live thousands of miles apart, and have never met. That might be a snag...

[Janine]

If you say so. The student overpasses the master it seems? Muahahaha!!!!
Yes, I belive I have won wispy's heart with my letter. And she has yet to read the second. Unfortunately we live thousands of miles apart, and have never met. That might be a snag...

:lol: That just may be....in more ways than one....damned if you do and damned if you don't! :lol: Better keep writing letters; safer that way.

[Silas Thorne]

:lol: terrific from both of you! much better than squirrel wars and vicious woodland animal duels. :lol:

How disturbing it would be to actually get real love letters like this! :)

Mad and limitless fun. Please wisp and kevin, keep on with these writing duels. You work off each other magnificently. :)

[jon1jt]

I'm here Jon! What's the question- anything about Kevin, I can answer it!! (whether or not I want to is the question)

Hey Skibs what's the deal with Kevin...one minute he's holding out for his true love and jamming on a mosh pit date with a cutey and the next minute he's posting touchy-feely love letters to a girl he's never met.

My question is a simple one, Skibs, Is it possible that Kevin was sloshed on Jack Daniels the night he wrote these love letters? :D

[skib]

Hey Skibs what's the deal with Kevin...one minute he's holding out for his true love and jamming on a mosh pit date with a cutey and the next minute he's posting touchy-feely love letters to a girl he's never met.

My question is a simple one, Skibs, Is it possible that Kevin was sloshed on Jack Daniels the night he wrote these love letters? :D

Yes Jon, it is very possible. I know for a fact that it wasn't on Jack, because I would have heard him peeling the wrapper off the lid and smelled it as soon as he opened the bottle, but he is a sneaky little alcoholic sometimes. He's also a smooth one when working the ladies. I'm not surprised if he has a few on the hook at all times, even ones that live across a nation from him ;)(all this is said in good fun, and even if he doesn't like it he'll just punch me tomorrow and be done with it!)

And GUESS WHAT?? He's moshing right now. And where am I not? Moshing.
What kind of friend is that??:bawling:

[jon1jt]

Yes Jon, it is very possible. I know for a fact that it wasn't on Jack, because I would have heard him peeling the wrapper off the lid and smelled it as soon as he opened the bottle, but he is a sneaky little alcoholic sometimes.

:lol::lol: That's hilarious, Skibs! :lol:


He's also a smooth one when working the ladies. I'm not surprised if he has a few on the hook at all times, even ones that live across a nation from him ;)(all this is said in good fun, and even if he doesn't like it he'll just punch me tomorrow and be done with it!)

Just blame me. Actually, it is my fault, I provoked you! :D I'm just wondering about the mosh chick and whether he's going to kiss her. Keep me posted. I live vicariously through you and Kevin now, skibs. Thanks, my brother. ;)


And GUESS WHAT?? He's moshing right now. And where am I not? Moshing.
What kind of friend is that??:bawling:

I almost missed this part. Hey Kevin that's not cool, you mosher fosher-leave-your-best-pal-home-good-for-nothin!! Dude, Kevin has no respect for the boys. He should be in the pasture hanging with you, listening to chill music (maybe that bootylicious tune?) and sipping on something drunkily tasty.

[skib]

I shall give you the latest and greatest news, ASAP!
I don't know about said mosh-chick. They don't seem quite the matching types. But who am I to judge?!?
BTW- we probably won't be on tomorrow night, because it is Kevvy's last night in town before he heads back up into the mountains, so our plan is to get TANKED. So he'll make up for tonight tomorrow when he brings the Jack.;)
(right Kevin?)

[jon1jt]

I shall give you the latest and greatest news, ASAP!
I don't know about said mosh-chick. They don't seem quite the matching types. But who am I to judge?!?
BTW- we probably won't be on tomorrow night, because it is Kevvy's last night in town before he heads back up into the mountains, so our plan is to get TANKED. So he'll make up for tonight tomorrow when he brings the Jack.;)
(right Kevin?)


Hey Skibs, go crazy tomorrow, hell yeah! I think I'll drink tomorrow night too. Only seems appropriate. Have a drink for me, and I'll have two drinks for the two of you. Raise your bottles high, moon level. Enjoy Jack as Jack wishes. :D

[skib]

As you wish! The bottles will be flying with the freshly risen full moon.
Jack Daniel's if you please . . . :)

[*Classic*Charm*]

This whole thread is AWESOME!! You guys better keep this up, I'm laughing hysterically.

Jeez, Kevin, what kind of people do you hang out with that Love Letters are common? And why aren't these people close to where I live?

[kevinthediltz]

Wow wow wow wow wow...
First off, where is my wispy?
Secondly, I offered for skib to come with me but he refused. Plus were shooting shotguns later today.
Thirdly, the mosh pit girl is seriously just a friend. It would be too weird if anything happened.
Fourthly, I AM going to punch you in the face when I see you. (but we do this anyway so its not much of a change.)
Fifthly, Classic, its not that common. There was just this one girl... long story... Well I dont consider myself a romantic author by anymeans, although I've been known to say "cute" things on the spot. And I am the "sensitive" guy that girlys come to for advice. When I write, its usually about things other than love.
Sixthly, thank you silas. I love our little poetry battles.
Seventhly.... Well I got nothin.

[andave_ya]

hahahaha what a BRILLIANT thread. All of it! You guys are great...I can see the sparks...(quite literally - I think my computer is objecting to having such, ahem, stuff on it screen :p)...somebody should really make this a game..."Write a love letter to the PAM." :D

[LostPrincess13]

Oh my! Here I was thinking gloomily how chivalry and romanticism are dead, and here I find this thread with love letters that could have been written by Shakespeare himself! :D

LOL!:lol: Thank you guys!:D You've given me hope in the world!:lol:

P.S. Um, are these really what love letters look like? I don't think my generation had these, and I, too have never gotten one so I wouldn't really know. :blush:

[skib]

Princess, love letters like these only come from gentlemen with a Pure and True heart like Kevvy.:p (no, but seriously- he can be a gentleman when he wants to.)

[Shurtugal]

this is so funny! lol. and i agree with andya!

[a_little_wisp]

Saddles, horses, and cows, oh my! This could be taken in an interesting direction, but I'll keep it pure. Gwahaha.


Dearest of my heart,

Two love letters? I do not deserve all you give me, truly - you give me more love than I ever asked for, in all of my dreams.

As you leave, and you must, for though our souls shine as one now, our lives continue onwards in different places–
But we are under the same sky, and we exchange our hearts with equal love. Never forget that, when you leave.

Know this, Kevin, when you go –

Things will change. Time changes all things - it molds us and shapes us. Even the love we have for each other will change, and it grow to be perhaps unrecognizable, one hundred times more powerful than it is now. At the root of it will be what we have here, but it will change – and it must, for what is love that sits in the stagnant and murky pools of the past? If our love cannot learn to grow with the world, then the world will certainly destroy it.

When you, or I, began to feel as if we are no longer soaring from the delight we find in each other, and the shine seems to dim, don’t doubt us. We cannot forever fly, we must eventually come down to earth, and that is where the true test begins. Are we able to grow with each other, to accept what may change, to stand in love, rather than fall into it, to grasp each other’s hands and say, “We will withstand the tests of time" ?

I love you, not for your words- though I do love them – or for your talents, but the man who rests at the center of it all, who loves others, who treats others with fairness, who loves life; who believes in his dreams, who reaches for the moon and knows that life is no easy journey, and we must work to get through and come out whole in the end - and we will. You’re not perfect, no – you’re very bloodthirsty when it comes to squirrels, for instance – and time will no doubt reveal that we two are both flawed in more ways than we may wish to be. Know now, my love spares no part of you - it consumes you whole. I love every facet that completes your being, your essence, even the bloodthirsty bits.

I cannot always be your earth. I cannot always hold you, cannot always be there to light your days. You must, alone, learn to hold out – as must I, without you – but I believe you can.

Our love is the seed, we are the gardeners.

Just as we nourish our lives, we must nourish this love. It’s small and fragile, and it will take dedication to help it grow. We will get frustrated, but when we think we have no more to give, when drought seems to have dried up our affection for each other, then the tempest will rise again, and we’ll be swept away, and the rains will nourish the earth of this carefully tended love, and our love will be as a tree – filling the sky, touching the moon and stars with its branches, the wind whispering through its boughs the story of us.

“I love”
“Our love”
“Love” –
An endless circle.

Think of me when you’re under the stars, far and away from me. Remember me, and dream of the future- our future - of the hope that we may, against all odds, last and last and grow old together – and love each other without end.

May I be the Wisper of love in your darkest days as you are in mine,
Haleigh

[prendrelemick]

Can love ever be strong enough to survive the slaughter of squirrels?:lol:

[skib]

Apparently, it can.

[kevinthediltz]

Wispy, the beauty of your writing continues to astound me. I am touched. And I will truely miss our duels. :D
And I cant believe the hype this thread created.

[a_little_wisp]

Pish posh. T'isn't good enough to astound. Yours were much more eloquent, I think. :D - But thank you.

I too will miss our duels!!! I will cherish them always! :O And when you come back - if you come back - then we can continue. :D

I can just imagine everyone seeing the thread while browsing: "WHAT? PUBLIC LOVE LETTERS!? YEEES!" And running over. You're the charmer of LitNet now, Kev! You have to live up to it! Gwahahaha!

Awesome everyone for commenting!!!! :D I got on tonight and was like "... what. happened." And then laughed a whole bunch. A wonderful ending to a good day!

[Scheherazade]

W a r n i n g

Some off-topic posts have been deleted from this thread and will be in future too.

If you have any personal problems with any members, please deal with them via PMs, not on the public boards, or report them officially to the Moderators.

[PrinceMyshkin]

W a r n i n g

Some off-topic posts have been deleted from this thread and will be in future too.

If you have any personal problems with any members, please deal with them via PMs, not on the public boards, or report them officially to the Moderators.

I suspect it was a post of mine that prompted this warning, for which I apologize.

[xtianfriborg13]

Awww. Sweet!