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The Rider
03-21-2009, 03:30 AM
Here's to you,
Whoever you are,
I thought I knew,
But not anymore.

Dark Muse
03-22-2009, 12:55 AM
Short and simple yet I like it. It seems to speak of a feeling of loneliness. It feels like a call to try and make a connection. Like writing an anonymous note on a wall without ever knowing who might come and read it.

The Rider
03-23-2009, 01:30 AM
That indeed was half of the inspiration :) Thank you very much for the comment!

kevinthediltz
03-23-2009, 01:33 AM
lonelyness explained in four lines.
Great poem.

The Rider
03-23-2009, 02:02 AM
Thanks Kevin!