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Dark Muse
03-04-2009, 11:29 PM
It All Turns Round

Where will I go
when the sky falls down
around me, and the earth
crumbles beneath my feet
while the seas collapse
within

Where will I run
when all the skies turn
purple, and the world
is a shade of gray
the rain dances
inside of me

What will I do
when all seems to be lost
and grass is no longer green
sitting in the shade
drinking electric blue
lemonade

What have I done
frozen among the stones
trapped within this ruin
lifeless eyes covered in
ice

So this has become
of moonless nights
and a toppling sun
red capped mountains
rivers without time

Where will I go
Where will I run
What will I do
What have I done
So this has become

PrinceMyshkin
03-05-2009, 11:20 AM
What a passionate expression of the despair and fear we all must feel these days!

Dark Muse
03-05-2009, 12:42 PM
Thank you

firefangled
03-05-2009, 03:57 PM
I do like what you're expressing here, Dark Muse. I especially like the way you summed it up in the last stanza.

Did you ever consider putting the frst lines in S1-4 at the end of the stanzas and removing the word "so?" I like the way you implied the word "what" by saying "of moonless nights..."

Dark Muse
03-05-2009, 04:19 PM
Thank you, no I had not considered that