Need Help with Thesis Sentence!

[hidef06]

i'm not sure if this is in the right forum topic, so sorry if it's not, but........

i'm about to start writing a research paper and it has to do with globalization and my topic is animal experimentation. i'm having a really hard time coming up with a thesis sentence that shows that i'm against animal experimentation and that relates the topic to globalization.

any suggestions? thanks!
-HD

[JBI]

I am against animal experimentation because...
I don't know why you are, or really what this has to do with literature, so I don't think I can take things further, though if it is a formal essay, you may want to try:

Animal experimentation is wrong (substitute adjectives for wrong, depending on what follows, such as cruel, immoral, etc.) because...

[Wilde woman]

Hmmm, if you're looking for literature that shows animal experimentation in a bad light, check out Richard Adams' The Plague Dogs. Or even Flowers for Algernon.