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Dark Muse
11-06-2008, 02:15 AM
Black Daisy

Black daises
like this black
love of mine

surely begin
to dwindle and die
carried away upon
the wind

Seeds of all
that remain
to fall upon
this black earth

Where maybe
they will come
to birth

A poison fruit
or an untold truth

islandclimber
11-06-2008, 03:45 AM
I love this DarkMuse.. so simple yet so beautiful in a dark and sad way.. lots of feeling in it.. I love the imagery of sadness and bleakness using flowers in poetry... for some flowers are so sad and lonely and melancholy in my own opinion.. well when looked at in a certain way... but back to what I wanted to say, this is an amazing poem.. :)

Dark Muse
11-06-2008, 03:50 AM
Thank you very much