Our souls together for this instant dance.

[Silven]

Here is a poem I submitted to another forum some time ago:

I have modified it according to some advice I received.






A radiant energy abundant between two parties
In a room surrounded by other beings

Vision becomes blurred, dicoloured and distorted
but one thing for this instant is clear

a diamond sharp vision allowed for one soul
from a halo'd head to tips of toes

I remember you... I know you now
Noise & speech fade to a dull murmer

And here you and me reach over to each other
Slower than an infinity in an instant

The distance between us halves and halves again
An electric current crosses between to statues then.

awakening and strumming such emotion
Our souls together for this instant dance.

[Tournesol]

I like this poem!
I held my breath to read it, I find it very captivating, even titillating!!

[hoope]

hey silven ... u always come with the best..
the poem is more than great
i salute u for ur way of writing :-)

[Silven]

Thankyou for your kind words.