Haiku on Steinway&Sons

[JTParreira]

Elegant Legs
the Steinway as a woman
with a black dress.

J.T.Parreira

[qimissung]

I like your haiku. I don't like the use of the pronoun 'his'-how do you know your Steinway is a man? In which case, couldn't you use the word 'tuxedo'? Not that there's anything wrong with a cross-dressing piano! :)

[firefangled]

Elegant Legs
the Steinway as a woman
in his black dress.

J.T.Parreira

JT, I like your strange juxtaposition of syntax, pronouns, and modifiers. I have to admit that I would think of a him when thinking of Steinway, which I seldom do, other than to remeber when we stopped seeing each other.

I rather see this long cool woman in a black dress as the music box, Steinway as the black varnish.

Either way, I very much enjoyed this one.

[JTParreira]

Thanks. I think that it is better.I made changes.