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peter7805
07-12-2008, 10:32 PM
Earthquake is shaking our life
I see people die
Though buried underground soul rise
in deep memory we never forget
so lovely those dear lives
All of a suddenly passes by
On that day cried I
with deeep sorrows inside
Candles burning with heart light
And hopes and love ever lie
To be with you I see your eyes
like the stars shining in the dark night

ampoule
07-12-2008, 11:24 PM
Your poem shows the sadness and even helplessness we are left with after an earthquake. I lived through a 9 pointer.

blazeofglory
07-19-2008, 10:28 PM
Earthquake is shaking our life
I see people die
Though buried underground soul rise
in deep memory we never forget
so lovely those dear lives
All of a suddenly passes by
On that day cried I
with deeep sorrows inside
Candles burning with heart light
And hopes and love ever lie
To be with you I see your eyes
like the stars shining in the dark night

There seems to be a flame of hope in life.