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ryan_haberman
05-20-2008, 08:17 PM
Through the field he ran,
The Sun would ne’er rise;
But once he saw a man,
Who only shrugged in despise.

The path grew tall with vines,
Roots at every step;
The sun still did hide,
To it he seemed inept.

As the trail began to twist
The sun had crept beneath a cloud
And the trees roared and hissed;
All he wished was to yell aloud,
But it would only be missed.

Amongst the rivers he came
He would now have to swim;
The sun looked down with shame
But would hide beneath a brim.

Though tired he still pressed on
When others would have quit;
To the sun he seemed as if a pawn,
Who would do nothing but spit.

In the distance the end began to near,
But would cower away and hide in fear;
The sun had seemed to not let him finish,
And let his hopes and dreams be diminished.

lucidnightmares
05-20-2008, 08:26 PM
though a sad poem the imagery is beautiful, i can`t help but find my conscious stray from my body.

wonderful.

blazeofglory
05-21-2008, 11:05 AM
Marvelous piece I should say