the wine and those eyes

[ahsiam]

in december it rains
the wine glass stands still
deceived by those crystal rain drops
the wine becomes those drops
those drops become the wine.


those eyes are still-
wide open
deceived by those rain drops
the urgence died
the wine and those eyes are one-
death lies dead.

[blazeofglory]

in december it rains
the wine glass stands still
deceived by those crystal rain drops
the wine becomes those drops
those drops become the wine.


those eyes are still-
wide open
deceived by those rain drops
the urgence died
the wine and those eyes are one-
death lies dead.

In fact in my part of the world it does not rain in December, but in poetry it can rain. A wonderful blending of words to give perfect images.
You are a sculptor can come up with wonderful poems.

[ahsiam]

In fact in my part of the world it does not rain in December, but in poetry it can rain. A wonderful blending of words to give perfect images.
You are a sculptor can come up with wonderful poems.


thank you, blaze... you are always an inspiration for my poem. :D
am i?.... :D

[symphony]

Not good.
Great.

[kelby_lake]

love it! maybe 'coz i really like wine ;)

[dibyendra]

I value the following lines for their vividness.



the wine becomes those drops
those drops become the wine.




death lies dead.

Good job!

[ahsiam]

Not good.
Great.

i thought you didnt like it...thanks... :D

[ahsiam]

love it! maybe 'coz i really like wine ;)


kelby i like wine too...it sounds great but dont drink alcohol...:p
i am glad you loved my little piece of work. :)

[ahsiam]

I value the following lines for their vividness.





Good job!

:D thank you dib.