Death with lust!

[formality hater]

Deep beneath the mounds of earth,
Lies once lavish coffin
The fragrant wood has failed to stop,
The termites from their doings
And engraved upon its battered edges,
Are mocking,daunting words,
"Rest in peace, you depraved soul,
Upon the death with lust
For this wood won't rust
While you...perish to dust!"
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Please, do comment!

[ShadowFire]

THAT IS AMAZING!!!! You have such style. I like the images and the fact that you say so much in so little words. I like the two lines "Upon the death with lust" and "While you....perish to dust!". This is very well written and I re-read it multiple times. Thank you for sharing.

[ReynardKitsune]

WOW such a stern poem filled with majesty!! simply awe- taking! marvelous super-licious!

[formality hater]

Thanks for reading and and taking some time out to comment aswell!Thanks a lot guys!