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PrinceMyshkin
01-22-2008, 08:10 AM
I'm posting this on behalf of a friend of mine:





Your voice like a melody softly falling
lends peace to the air, giving this
terrain the even cover of its drifting,
releasing flakes from a clear blue sky
turned black in the night, leaving for
tomorrow a crust on which we step...

come, fall on my arms, cover me,
dust me with white feathers until
they glisten on my lips; the air
is a moving being, alive with
lights...

while never sleeping the earth
is bound in silence,
listening.



Rojan Zét

CdnReader
01-22-2008, 08:25 AM
Wow! Beautiful! :)

ampoule
01-22-2008, 08:46 AM
I really love these lines.


while never sleeping the earth
is bound in silence,
listening.

TheFifthElement
01-22-2008, 09:58 AM
I'm posting this on behalf of a friend of mine:





Your voice like a melody softly falling
lends peace to the air, giving this
terrain the even cover of its drifting,
releasing flakes from a clear blue sky
turned black in the night, leaving for
tomorrow a crust on which we step...

come, fall on my arms, cover me,
dust me with white feathers until
they glisten on my lips; the air
is a moving being, alive with
lights...

while never sleeping the earth
is bound in silence,
listening.



Rojan Zét


Wow, your friend is very talented. This is beautiful, whispery and soft like snowflakes. I love it.

dibyendra
01-22-2008, 11:33 AM
I loved each and every line of this poem. This poem as a whole is brilliantly written.

Pendragon
01-22-2008, 12:38 PM
I am like Amp, those last three lines are magic! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Tinkerbell.gif

Sweets America
01-22-2008, 01:56 PM
Oh I love it!! I love poems that listen and whisper, like this one.:)

PrinceMyshkin
01-23-2008, 11:55 AM
Oh I love it!! I love poems that listen and whisper, like this one.:)

"Poems that listen" is such a wonderful poetic thought!

blazeofglory
01-25-2008, 11:21 PM
It is really moving and intriguing one!!