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CdnReader
09-11-2007, 05:36 AM
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wisps of memories
fleeting glances
touches remembered

fading visions of the paths chosen
crystal clear in my mind’s eye
dreams fulfilled
dreams still evolving
new dreams that can’t yet be imagined

the future reaches
grabs my hand
and pulls me through the portal

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PrinceMyshkin
09-11-2007, 08:36 AM
I admire the economy of this and the feeling of spontaneity in it as of a woman raising her head from a reverie and speaking out freely.

firefangled
09-11-2007, 08:59 AM
I am loving this style you have come to use for a variety of contents. I think Prince is on the right track with what it conveys emotionally. To me it is even more like a woman speaking under hypnosis, still in the reverie.

CdnReader
09-12-2007, 04:05 AM
Thanks very much, Fire. I appreciate your comments, but I'm not sure what this "style" even is. I guess they just fall out that way sometimes. ;)

ampoule
09-12-2007, 05:06 AM
Sometimes I am scared of that portal. I like the way this 'fell out' Cdn. ;)

CdnReader
09-12-2007, 08:17 AM
I think most of us usually are, Amp. Thrilled, and scared. (Thanks.) :)

Sweets America
09-12-2007, 08:35 AM
This is a subtle description of dreams and life in general.
I love this part:
fading visions of the paths chosen
crystal clear in my mind’s eye

CdnReader
09-12-2007, 01:43 PM
Thanks very much, Sophie. :)