More Drivel

[Poppy]

Maybe it was the big brown eyes
that I noticed first.
Or the slightly reddish blonde
shoulder length hair.

Or maybe it was the skirt that
revealed shapely legs.
Could it have been the smile
formed by perfect lips?

Then maybe after she said yes to
the meal and date.
It could have been just the great
conversation.

Um maybe it was the way she slid
getting into the car.
But likely it was the first kiss ever
as Romeo and Juliet played.

ABSOLUTELY, THAT’S IT!!!

[CdnReader]

But likely it was the first kiss ever
as Romeo and Juliet played.

ABSOLUTELY, THAT’S IT!!!

Whooo-eeeeeee!!!!! Very cool stuff! Thanks, Poppy. :D

[PrinceMyshkin]

Maybe it was the big brown eyes
that I noticed first.
Or the slightly reddish blonde
shoulder length hair.

Or maybe it was the skirt that
revealed shapely legs.
Could it have been the smile
formed by perfect lips?

Then maybe after she said yes to
the meal and date.
It could have been just the great
conversation.

Um maybe it was the way she slid
getting into the car.
But likely it was the first kiss ever
as Romeo and Juliet played.

ABSOLUTELY, THAT’S IT!!!

Geez! I hope you aren't talking about some big-mouth bass that almost got away!

[rabid reader]

Geez! I hope you aren't talking about some big-mouth bass that almost got away!

they are called large-mouthed bass.

Big -mouth bass sounds like there is a fish swinging about giving everyone it meats attitude.

[AuntShecky]

Now, now, don't call this "more drivel."
Especially when you put in the effort!

[Poppy]

Now, now, don't call this "more drivel."
Especially when you put in the effort!

Thanks Auntie, Its appreciated.

[bibliophile190]

I like it.

[motherhubbard]

It was the kiss wasn't it! Maybe mom will write about the same one-
lovely drivel dad

[kiz_paws]

Your "drivel" rocks my world. Loved it. :)

[Pendragon]

You don't write drivel, Poppy... Poetry: Yes. Drivel: No.

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