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rabid reader
08-19-2007, 04:27 PM
As I quietly weep,
At everything I have built.
The time I have spent,
As the fruits begin to wilt.
The future was my sanities keep.
But where I kept it, seems lost.
That failure is my guilt.
My cluelessness is it’s cost.

What is it I can do?
This has always been the plan
I have nothing left to dream.
No one left to love, not one fan.
My mother and everyone knew
This was where I was going.
Now that it’s lost I could scream!
Now where am I going.

formality hater
08-20-2007, 01:18 AM
As I quietly weep,
At everything I have built.
The time I have spent,
As the fruits begin to wilt.
The future was my sanities keep.
But where I kept it, seems lost.
That failure is my guilt.
My cluelessness is it’s cost.

What is it I can do?
This has always been the plan
I have nothing left to dream.
No one left to love, not one fan.
My mother and everyone knew
This was where I was going.
Now that it’s lost I could scream!
Now where am I going.


It is Amazing!The flow and everything!


That failure is my guilt.
My cluelessness is it’s cost.

Brilliant!

Pensive
08-20-2007, 06:08 AM
Good work, rabid reader! :)

rabid reader
08-20-2007, 11:40 AM
thanks all