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Danik 2016
04-13-2022, 12:50 PM
re: Thanks! Petrichor. Learned that the smell of rain has an own name! Liked the onomatopeia of your breakfast.

Lunch

White extensions
of rice dominate
the small battlefield!

tailor STATELY
04-14-2022, 06:01 AM
Thanx... enjoyed your poem :)


stone frog

early drizzly bound
a spotted stone frog soaking
near a garden gnome

4/14/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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Danik 2016
04-14-2022, 08:31 AM
Liked that image. Enjoying writing Haikus, they are a good image training. Still having much difficulty though with the more extensive forms.

Early morning sun
Doggy happiness abounds
Pensive doves!

tailor STATELY
04-14-2022, 09:01 AM
Another bright image :)

Haikus were among my favorite poetic training exercises... their brevity an aesthetic expression. Studying Basho's poetry is an illumination.


breathe


haiku brevity
polished stones in a cool stream
give aesthetic breath

4/14/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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04-16-2022, 12:11 PM
chicken dinner
strangled eventide
a little, plump chicken roars
before the ax falls

4/16/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Danik 2016
04-17-2022, 06:29 PM
:( Grrrrrrrrrrrr!

tailor STATELY
04-18-2022, 04:26 AM
More of a country life vignette I guess... ~ 81% generated. Btb: get my chxn at the store... and
chxn eggs have gone from $13/5-dozen to $18/5-dozen very quickly here (which had fluctuated from $8/5-dozen to $10/5-dozen seasonally at the big box stores last year - all prices USD)... Avian flu and new Farm Regulatory laws related. $5/dozen by local farm providers now. I will be scaling down my egg breakfasts accordingly. May have to buy some chxns.


bedraggled

showery foreshore
an eagle perches nearby
drenched, beyond annoyed

4/18/2022

https://www.newyorker.com/culture/susan-orlean/wet-feathers#:~:text=The%20word%20“bedraggled”%20was%2 0invented,fowl%20in%20a%20tropical%20storm.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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Danik 2016
04-18-2022, 08:22 AM
re: Not appropriate "country life vignette" if one loves animals, though I own buying chicken in stores makes one forget, that they were killed. One of my frustrations is that I didn´t manage to become vegetarian. Meat of all sorts and eggs prices have increased greatly here also, with a two digit inflation. Hardly it eggs any more, because of intolerance. Always wondered and envied the robust Nord American stomachs that tolerate FRIED eggs for breakfast. I hope you find a good substitute, scaling a bit down might be positive for cholesterol.

Perched on the roofs
Birds enjoy the view
Feasting on their fleas.

tailor STATELY
04-18-2022, 03:13 PM
re: Not appropriate "country life vignette" if one loves animals, though I own buying chicken in stores makes one forget, that they were killed. One of my frustrations is that I didn´t manage to become vegetarian. Meat of all sorts and eggs prices have increased greatly here also, with a two digit inflation. Hardly it eggs any more, because of intolerance. Always wondered and envied the robust Nord American stomachs that tolerate FRIED eggs for breakfast. I hope you find a good substitute, scaling a bit down might be positive for cholesterol.

Perched on the roofs
Birds enjoy the view
Feasting on their fleas.

Re: cholesterol... I have averaged eating 5-dozen eggs a month for more years than I can remember and my latest value is 144 from my blood donation recap letter results dated 2/8/2022... which is in the acceptable range... It's never been high for some reason (genetics?).

Love your haiku ! The birds are very abundant here now that spring on this side of the equator is in full gear.


tiny frogs

cheerful sunny creek
tiny frogs serenading
shiny old pebbles

4/18/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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tailor STATELY
04-20-2022, 06:03 AM
desert moon

darkening sand dunes
still shimmer from the day's heat
a cold moon rises

4/20/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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04-21-2022, 08:28 AM


a mid-day struggle
a carver in the forest
pocket knife in hand

4/21/2022

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Danik 2016
04-21-2022, 12:15 PM
desert moon

darkening sand dunes
still shimmer from the day's heat
a cold moon rises

4/20/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY


Suitable https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FuRfnASBwpg

Danik 2016
04-21-2022, 12:25 PM
One tiny ant
carries a sugar trophy
Gigantic tea cups.

tailor STATELY
04-21-2022, 03:44 PM
Miss the genius of Nat King Cole... Your Haiku reminded me of the song "High Hopes" where an ant aspires to move a rubber tree plant :)


oblivious

bobbing to and fro
a log floats idly downstream
clunking against stones

4/21/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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04-22-2022, 07:30 AM
too oft

starlight eventide
comets traverse the heavens
too oft out of sight

4/22/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Danik 2016
04-22-2022, 08:17 AM
True!

Tardigrades swim
Deep down watery domains.
Starlight shows the way.

tailor STATELY
04-22-2022, 11:14 AM
There's them tardigrades again... ubiquitous little critters :)


seals

searching for her pup
a lone mother fur seal barks
where leopard seals skulk

4/22/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Danik 2016
04-22-2022, 12:34 PM
AI!

Forest of flowers
Tumble down the wall
Birds remain cautious.

tailor STATELY
04-22-2022, 02:09 PM
Speaking of birds...


baseball

empowered boobirds
nesting in the catbird seats
enjoying pure bliss

4/22/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

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04-24-2022, 01:58 AM
box turtle

on damp matted reeds
a box turtle suns itself
dank cool pond beckons

4/22/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Danik 2016
04-24-2022, 07:50 AM
AI!

To a white cat with a black tail

Napping drowsily,
White cat behind the net,
Dreaming of freedom.

tailor STATELY
04-25-2022, 01:50 AM
Cat poetry !

divide poets society

sunny reception
patrons on the divide bask
centered on a hen

4/24/2022

or

divide poets society #2

sunny reception
patrons of the arts basking
centered on a hen

4/24/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
04-26-2022, 03:09 AM
fog

ocean side daydream
a cool salty fog wanders
leisurely rolling

4/26/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
04-26-2022, 10:08 AM
Like this frog images

Erratic pebbles
Wandering down crunchy
beaches, aimlessly.

tailor STATELY
04-26-2022, 12:57 PM
Beach vibe :) ... continued...



jelly

Unfriendly capture
A squishy, dank jelly stings
found in the seaweed

4/26/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
04-27-2022, 04:34 AM
raccoon

after break of day
a small bushy raccoon plays
enjoying the rain

4/27/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
04-29-2022, 04:05 AM
kite

naughty aurora
kissing a long tailed kite's skies
a glowing shimmer

4/29/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
04-29-2022, 07:46 AM
raccoon

after break of day
a small bushy raccoon plays
enjoying the rain

4/27/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor


AAAIII!

Little beach turtles
Rapidly moving their legs
Sea awaits their eggs

tailor STATELY
04-29-2022, 08:47 AM
Love it :)


will-o'-wisp

through the cool marish
a sultry will-o'-wisp drifts
as ev'n tide draws near

4/29/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
05-01-2022, 02:56 AM
pebbles in flight

beatified sun
a delightful rain presumes
pebbles take up flight

4/30/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
05-02-2022, 02:49 AM
lament

wearisome night falls
a large, marshy bog whimpers
forsaken by sprites

5/1/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-02-2022, 07:52 AM
Sad, but...


Morning

Clad in sunrise
Noisy city awakes
Night ghosts take flight!

tailor STATELY
05-03-2022, 09:42 AM
:) Ghost fun facts... https://ohfact.com/interesting-facts-about-ghosts/


city nights

on deep reflection
in shop windows they appear
ghosts walking the streets

5/3/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-04-2022, 09:59 AM
Lol! Interesting image play. re:Enjoyed the link. Wanted to present Pluft, the little friendly Ghost a play by Maria Clara Machedo, but found no link in English.

Ghosts

Sudden movements
White desolate sheets
flutter in the wind...

tailor STATELY
05-05-2022, 12:21 PM
An English thumbnail sketch of Pluft: https://cinando.com/en/Film/pluft_184524/Detail (I found she also wrote The King's tailor :) )


moistly ghostly

supernatural
a little moistly toad sits
by the curlicues

5/5/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
05-06-2022, 02:56 AM
yarrow's demise

dawn wakes the new day
a wilting yarrow writhes
cries with daffodil

5/5/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-06-2022, 10:42 AM
Enjoyed both Haikus. Thanks for the Pluft link, Tailor. Finally found the classical Pluft image I was looking for:
https://br.pinterest.com/pin/492018328011014128/?mt=login

Pluft

Of human badness
Dressed in gorgeous arrays
I was much afraid.

Me, such a small ghost
The unfathomable world
So full of anger!

tailor STATELY
05-06-2022, 03:40 PM
The br.pinterest link wouldn't work for some reason so I just took the br. prefix off and got a result that ultimately led me to https://www.youtube.com/watch?reload=9&v=q3EuT9QMVoc which is a delightful production of a Pluft play. More than 20 minutes in a few influences to catch my eye/ear: Baha Men's "Who Let the Dogs Out", The Monkeys' "I'm a Believer", and Mancini's classic "Pink Panther"... quite cute. I couldn't follow all that was going on due to my ignorance of the language, but I got the main idea :) Found a few images of Pluft too ! Your double Haiku "Pluft" is wonderful !

meandering thoughts

an overcast sky
a lightsome, lazy wind blows
a promise of rain ?

5/6/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
05-08-2022, 01:36 AM
the chase

for kicks and giggles
færies ride upon tree frogs
chasing dragonflies

5/7/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-08-2022, 10:11 AM
Cute poem!

The squirrel

A squinting squirrel
posing with a tasty nut
graces Central Park

tailor STATELY
05-09-2022, 10:19 AM
:)


reflective

a teddy bear stares
at a stuffed alligator
glass eyes reflective

5/9/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-10-2022, 09:02 AM
Loved the word play!

Fading light

Vanishing sunbeams
In the horizon, may dusk
fall lightly on us

tailor STATELY
05-11-2022, 07:19 PM
Loved this :)


noisome


noisome delta dawn
sonorous cicadas buzz
frogs chirrump and peep

5/11/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-12-2022, 08:45 AM
Loved it!

Damaged Haiku

If you get a cold
Because you are old
It isn´t the wold.

tailor STATELY
05-12-2022, 07:33 PM
lol... hoping you are well.


two donkeys


sunshine and windy
two donkeys feed at leisure
among the shade trees

5/12/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-13-2022, 12:48 PM
Loved the image. Yes, it´s a self consolatory poem, but the cold is getting better already, thanks!

Sleepy afternoon
Under the fading sunlight
the workers doze.

tailor STATELY
05-14-2022, 08:04 AM
Glad to know :) Liked your vignette too.


sand castles


sultry ocean side
heavy, quiet clouds passing
over sand castles

5/14/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-14-2022, 10:47 AM
Thanks! Liked yours very much too, specially it´s double meaning.

The village sleeps
one lonely rooster
advertises dawn.

tailor STATELY
05-14-2022, 03:15 PM
lol... now I see it ! A neighbor used to have a rooster about 1/4 mile (0.42 km) away that seemed to crow all the time that echoed through our little valley.


rusted

magical desert
a rusted car supplies shade
gila monsters grin

5/14/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
05-19-2022, 07:52 PM
simple needs

coneflowers abound
their cheerful blossoms provide
a bee's simple needs

5/19/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-20-2022, 07:13 AM
Dutifully looked up gila monsters:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gila_monster. Ejoyed specially the bees' haiku.

Wild winds still abound
Without exasperation,
Tiny doves rest.

tailor STATELY
05-21-2022, 03:02 AM
Lol... dutifully ? There's an old campy SciFi movie called "The Giant Gila Monster"... wikipedia: (spoilers)... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Giant_Gila_Monster
Enjoyed the Haiku... hoping the doves weather the storm.


spider fails

a dewy morning
a spider crawls sheepishly
betrayed by its web

5/21/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-21-2022, 06:48 AM
Loath spiders, but this one is endearing.

Lazy awakenings

Mornings cold breeze
prevails, waves subside
Streets move their legs.

tailor STATELY
05-21-2022, 07:18 AM
lol... I save spiders and get them out-of-doors with mixed results (currently recovering from obligatory spider bite).

Love "streets move their legs"... very urbane.


beside a still pond

beside a still pond
dulcet bird songs orchestrate
as day breaks - crisp, cool

5/21/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-21-2022, 11:45 AM
re: Spiders- (lol)If you really have to pet them, can´t you do it wearing those thick rubber gloves you surely have at home?

a harmonic vignette!

Saturdays/Sundays

Somehow the town
(yawning in the midday sun)
is not at home.

tailor STATELY
05-22-2022, 08:47 AM
re: spiders - yes

Sounds like a comfortable day :)


birds sing

The day yet to break
and birds sing before the dawn
- marvelous Sabbath

5/22/2022


Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-22-2022, 09:23 AM
Just like here, when the birds are not impelled to sing at midnight.

Praça Roosevelt on Sunday morning

A deserted place
then birds, fast paced people
morning breaks, dogs sing.

tailor STATELY
05-23-2022, 05:13 PM
Googled Praça Roosevelt... beautiful urban space... must have been nice to have it for your own for a time.


mountain meadow

lush mountain meadow
a fox halts by a poppy
gentle crisp winds blow

5/23/2022


Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
05-25-2022, 04:32 AM
plenty
beneath a hedgerow
an excited stoat kit chirps
as beechnuts are reaped

5/25/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-25-2022, 10:33 AM
Enjoyed both haikus. Wondering at the natural presence of foxes in more rural US( Thinking also of bluebiirds accounts, about the foxes near her house). re Praça Roosvelt: Tried to upload a picture I made of Praça Roosevelt with my Android from my window, but it didn´t work.:(

Loneliness
A little bird chirps
And listens for an answer
No one answers him.

tailor STATELY
05-25-2022, 12:59 PM
Love your Haiku... a touch of melancholy.

We have many foxes and blue birds (mostly Jays) here in Garden Valley... had a mountain lion on our property yesterday; bears once in a while. We have Pine Martins and other weasely kin, but the Stoat poem plenty was pure whimsy after a bit of woolgathering and googling.


beguine
a pungent beguine
clouds lazily rain upon
a honeysuckle

5/25/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-26-2022, 05:37 AM
Poor honeysuckle

re:"had a mountain lion on our property yesterday; bears once in a while" Are they pacific or do they try to attack? (if the question sounds to silly I only ever saw lions in the zoo or on a screen).

The lion

Early sunrise
A lion crosses the streets
His fur resplendent.

tailor STATELY
05-27-2022, 05:49 AM
Enjoyed the Haiku :)

Most wild animals out here stay away from people, but there are sightings... only a few animal stalkings and one death in memory nearby... https://www.latimes.com/archives/la-xpm-1994-04-26-mn-50703-story.html . Bears will enter homes and cars if they can when they smell food, but rarely happens here in the foothills where they're more likely to raid garbage cans... more problematic in Lake Tahoe (higher elevations)... https://wildlife.ca.gov/Conservation/Mammals/Black-Bear/Blog/ArticlePage/4/cid/126?category=south-lake-tahoe


grumpy toad
bewitching this day
a green, grumpy toad wallows
whilst watching the ants

5/27/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-27-2022, 07:27 AM
re: I guess, you all got used to these eventual visitors. Once in Canada I saw in the news that a big bear had bear attracted by the swimming pool of a mansion. Alas, here the garbage cans are raided by humans.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mEEuNmSS0m4

Bubaloo Bear

Meet Bubaloo bear
He lives around here
And enjoys brown beer

tailor STATELY
05-27-2022, 08:32 PM
Music: LOL !!! https://www.google.com/search?q=Grumpy+toad+meme&newwindow=1&client=opera&hs=LBn&sxsrf=ALiCzsZ2JjdZ3k_s4qBLDTfATpTVAlYyPQ:165369358 7256&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjDtNfW6ID4AhXaG80KHWW8DxkQ_AUoAXoECAEQA w

Poem: a very happy Bubaloo bear !


white-tailed hawk
whilst watching the lake
a white-tailed hawk shrieked out loud
my freed spirit soared

5/27/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
05-29-2022, 04:56 AM
gray owl
gray owl's mountain view
preparing for silent flight
rustling movement near

5/29/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-29-2022, 08:34 AM
:blush5:Seems I got so perplexed about the meaning of the haiku in # 565 that I forgot to come back. Liked grey owl


Walking down the street
Pondering about life
Meditative birds.

tailor STATELY
05-30-2022, 04:01 AM
lol...

Enjoyed the contemplative mood :)


bear cub
his mother near, a
black bear cub climbs a sapling
- eludes a stink bug

5/30/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-30-2022, 08:18 AM
AAII! You have quite a collection of cute animal poems for your page, I think!

The llama

A haughty llama
Ponders superciliously
On human frailties

tailor STATELY
05-30-2022, 03:56 PM
Super ! Your collection of verse is growing too :)


two black scorpions
two scorpions fret
huddled in a shale rock crease
no longer hidden

5/30/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
05-31-2022, 02:09 PM
Poor scorpions

Conflicts

The poor verse sulks
not heading his neighbor's grief
or rhymed despair.

tailor STATELY
06-01-2022, 03:50 AM
re: scorpions - a true story: about 20 years ago my then only grandson and I took a short walk up the road and stopped at a small hillside of shale and absent-mindedly took of a few hand-sized sheet-chunks of loosened shale off the side to reveal the scorpions; 2-black scorpions just minding their own business... we left them alone... hope they found a new hide-out.

Love the literary poem :)


at the beach, again
foggy seaside day
a gentle stream to traverse
beachcombing blanched sands

6/1/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-01-2022, 08:10 AM
re: Yea, scorpions like to hide in dark places. But you didn´t know they were there and they probably regarded it as a chalenge to move their residence.

Liked your seaside poem. It has been a good time since I went to one.

Rainy morning (as in older times)

Shiny puddles hail
torrents of gushing waters,
nosediving trees.

tailor STATELY
06-02-2022, 08:00 AM
re: seaside... sadly me too - used to be a large part of my life: beachcombing/solitude/family/tide pools

Love your poem... nosediving trees is intriguing; happens a lot here.


lakeside
a double rainbow
an island in the lake sings
as it touches shore

6/2/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-03-2022, 08:21 AM
Enchanting vignette!

Noon

A tired morning
Smelling of lunch lazily
enticing the sun

tailor STATELY
06-04-2022, 07:49 AM
My kind of morning :)


marsh færies
a crisp starry night
bats wheel tracking fireflies
while marsh færies dance

6/4/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-07-2022, 08:42 AM
Magical!

Trivial Vignette

Morning sun hiding
in the clouds; a little dog
yawns. Nothing happens.

tailor STATELY
06-08-2022, 08:00 AM
Lol... trivial ?


sn@ils
sheer faced slate hillside
coiled snails venture out early
while the morning reigns

6/8/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-08-2022, 09:13 AM
:smile5:


White clouds grace
the azure sky like
herds of cotton sheep.

tailor STATELY
06-08-2022, 05:20 PM
Love your poem :)


a home on the beach

a home on the beach
I would have honeysuckle
with a driftwood fence

6/8/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
06-11-2022, 07:29 AM
the curlews / half moon bay

each hot afternoon
several curlews forage
race the inbound tide

6/11/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-11-2022, 08:26 AM
Learned about curlews, graceful birds :)

Urban nights

Laughter, sirens, shouts,
Shrill sounds pervade the streets
Dimming distant stars!

tailor STATELY
06-12-2022, 05:23 AM
Enjoyed the city reflection and the "skyglow" effect... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Skyglow

a home by the sea

sand dollars would be
my currency - if I had
a home by the sea

6/12/2022



stone


perfect starry night
a weatherworn stone observes

the cold universe

6/12/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-12-2022, 01:24 PM
Thanks for the "skyglow" article. Had never thought about it, but one can´t conceive a modern city without it

Charming Haikus. Liked specially the second, though more somber one.

Bookish noses

They don´t get tanned.
Waves are unknown to these
Submerger in words.

Black Holes

Stir heart of darkness,
announce thy empty core.
Brilliant nothingness

tailor STATELY
06-13-2022, 10:26 AM
Thanx ! "Bookish noses": Lol ! Too true ! "Black Holes": an interesting study in such few words.


roly-polys


roly-polys play
their harps and viols bright - as
færies dance with joy!

6/13/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
06-14-2022, 08:09 AM
bunny

nibbling sweet clover
after twinkled in a trice
life hops eternal

6/14/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-14-2022, 02:42 PM
(AI!)

Devoted to emptiness

Zero verses today
Just a wide extended plain
With nothing on it.

tailor STATELY
06-15-2022, 12:27 PM
Enjoyed !


grief

how the days go on
when grief tugs at our heartstrings
misty through the fog

6/15/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-15-2022, 02:09 PM
Yes!

Aurora
Chirps hunting darkness
Hesitantly lit horizons
Light floods the morning

Inspired by Caetano Veloso's song "Pipoca moderna".

tailor STATELY
06-17-2022, 06:46 AM
I'd love to see the aurora sometime :)


old toad

glassy pond's surface
old toad gazes longingly
at his reflection

6/17/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-17-2022, 01:07 PM
AAII!

Streaks of golden sky

drown in the silent waters.

Sparkling surface

tailor STATELY
06-17-2022, 08:08 PM
re: "Inspired by Caetano Veloso's song "Pipoca moderna".... Found a version by Gilberto Gil...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?reload=9&v=tidY5nZBy1Y

... a different Aurora than I imagined. Off topic, but I just remembered the Aurora Bridge in Seattle when I was a child :) We lived nearby for a while - then moved in to my paternal Grandfather's home (a hoot and many hollers away) after he left for Alaska when my Grandmother passed on... then my maternal Grandmother and 2-Aunts and Uncle moved in to our old home by the Aurora Bridge where we visited quite often.

Love your Haiku... quite tranquil and reflective :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
06-18-2022, 09:37 AM
squirrels

early eventide
a young mother squirrel frets
her offspring restless

6/18/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-18-2022, 10:22 AM
Cute poem!

re: Didn't know this instrumental version of "Pipoca moderna" :).

When visiting Canada (in the nineties?) we set over to Seattle with a speedboat and stayed there a few hours. I remember the wood houses which are so usual in films.


Silent houses in
a row looking pensive
on a grassy plain.

tailor STATELY
06-18-2022, 08:33 PM
Love the Haiku !

Ah, speedboats in Seattle evoke very strong memories in me as a kid (late 50's/early 60's) :) My Dad had a friend that raced (hydroplanes) and he had a home on either Lake Washington or Union... I almost drowned there. We went to watch many races on the lakes including the manmade Green Lake, also in Seattle.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
06-19-2022, 03:23 AM
liberation

pure toned caresses -
binaural beats liberate
one's innermost light

6/19/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
06-19-2022, 07:55 AM
Intense and synthetic!

Night

The shadows of night
envelop the silent world.
Distant sirens sound.

tailor STATELY
06-20-2022, 04:49 AM
Very nice :)


whispers

when whispers take flight
only to fall feather light
morning is magic

6/20/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
07-01-2022, 05:44 AM
a long sigh

pastel sunset pales
a cumulus cloud transforms

into a long sigh

7/1/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-02-2022, 12:46 PM
It has the form of a cloud!

Contemporaneous rains

Single water pearls
Then torrents washing the soil,
Destruction follows

tailor STATELY
07-03-2022, 04:49 AM
(sigh) such tragedy from such a simplicity of nature... especially where clearcutting hazards people nearby. Flashfloods can be so unpredictable.

Staying with weather:


tsunami sunrise

feelings are forecast
an atmospheric river
tsunami sunrise

7/3/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-03-2022, 08:07 AM
A bad forecast!

The ants

A tidy queue
triumphs over the sugar
spilt on the table.

tailor STATELY
07-04-2022, 04:46 AM
Love it ! Such fastidious ants !


me boyo

come the arfternoon
an old, sharp whiskey staggers
suggests a wee dram

7/4/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Dark Muse
07-04-2022, 01:52 PM
To Bruno

Majestic beauty
gone as breath within the wind
carried in our hearts

tailor STATELY
07-04-2022, 06:27 PM
Sorry for your loss.


wild hare

in a forest land
a wild hare flees from fire
a cool pond beckons

7/4/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
07-07-2022, 09:04 AM
downtown

as downtown bustles
pedestrians weave and dodge
with vagility

7/7/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-07-2022, 09:21 AM
Loved the image and specially the word "vagility".

Vagility

There was an egg
looking for new horizons.
It broke its shell.

tailor STATELY
07-07-2022, 11:10 PM
Interesting image... vagility/egg/broke its shell/new horizons


woodrush & thrush

let magic begin
lithe woodrushes snuggle ferns
hermit thrush song thrills

https://www.allaboutbirds.org/guide/Hermit_Thrush/sounds

7/7/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-08-2022, 09:34 AM
Loved the poem. Also the thrush with its little trusted forward chest and its silvery voice.

Bem-te-vi

A brisk Bem te vi
starts the dialogue.
The forest responds.



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMAnr-1m-tY

tailor STATELY
07-09-2022, 06:54 AM
Loved the Haiku... Cute bird :) Its song is precious: "I saw you well !"


memorial for susan j



a soft july day
somber sweet remembrances
of love, sports, service

7/9/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-09-2022, 08:07 AM
just one birds tune sounds
in the deserted garden
of wilted flowers.

tailor STATELY
07-09-2022, 08:24 AM
Such a melancholy poem.


bird bath



such jubilation !
an improvised bird bath splash
puddles in the rain

7/9/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-10-2022, 08:00 AM
AAIII!

Splish and Splash

Into the puddle!

Doggy happiness abounds

out of the puddle!

tailor STATELY
07-13-2022, 08:21 AM
Enjoyed "Splish and Splash" :)


scythe

death's artful touch wields
a curved, sharp scythe harvesting
those whose time is ripe

7/13/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-13-2022, 10:29 AM
(alas) Ingenious poem. Hope again that all is well!

Escape

Wish I had two wings
to escape the sorrows
of exit tense.

tailor STATELY
07-13-2022, 06:40 PM
All is well... officiated over a memorial last Friday for a church friend and gave some parting words to her bereaved family... then polished up a 20 minute (or so) talk on Eternal Perspectives which I gave Sunday in church, so I guess I'm still pondering this mortal coil of ours.

Enjoyed your Haiku :)


misty veils

our divine lives
lie shrouded by misty veils
hid from mortal view

7/13/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-14-2022, 07:50 AM
Forgive the question: are you a minister. tailor?
Beautiful haiku!

A drop of water

A drop of water
feeds thousand of creatures
that brave the sun.

tailor STATELY
07-14-2022, 04:06 PM
I'm a Bishop's counselor... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bishop_(Latter_Day_Saints) - see "Bishops in the LDS Church" sub-heading.

Much about a drop of water :)


wassup cocoa ?

fuzzy waking up
warm cocoa not helping much
watching a slight breeze

7/14/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-15-2022, 07:49 AM
Thanks for the enlightening link, tailor!

Lol! No caffeine in that cocoa?

Lame haiku

Disguised as tea
Just fresh from the small faucet
Water for breakfast.

tailor STATELY
07-15-2022, 09:52 AM
Been severely sleep deprived. Lol - yup, definitely some caffeine: "there are roughly 10 milligrams of caffeine per teaspoon, 5*–10 times less than coffee." ref... https://coffeeaffection.com/how-much-caffeine-is-in-cocoa-powder/ and my drink is usually: 1 - tablespoon cocoa and 2 - tablespoon hot chocolate mix in about 375 ml 2% milk mixed with 375 ml water. I used to double the cocoa but cut back :)

That's some weak tea (lol).


poetry at work

coaxing words to play
piquing imagination
poetry at work

7/15/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-15-2022, 03:22 PM
Maybe a walk or working in the garden may help. When I stay much at home I get sleepless too.

Enjoyed the take on poetry! Let´s have a try!

Words, meter, music
blend into a fabric of
meaning. Emotion!

tailor STATELY
07-15-2022, 03:52 PM
Love it ! An Ars Poetica !!

portrait of winter

shamrock plant basking
in a white stoneware pitcher
winter rages by

7/15/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-16-2022, 10:38 AM
Then my warm winter is comforting.

Summer or Winter?
The July sun sheds its rays on
the dry landscape.

tailor STATELY
07-17-2022, 06:26 AM
:)


shadows 7/13/2022

the buck moon shone bright
sharp languid shadows answered
filtered through stark trees

7/17/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-17-2022, 01:37 PM
A beautiful vignette!

Elastic

Pack your existence
in seventeen words, three ver-
ses and a haiku.

tailor STATELY
07-18-2022, 02:04 AM
Another Ars Poetica !... with enjambment !!! Love it !


a metal dirge

old possum records
content goldfish feasting on
drowning silverfish

7/17/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-18-2022, 01:40 PM
AI!

Faulty Haiku

objects abound, lie
around, when there will be a
sort of order?

tailor STATELY
07-18-2022, 03:20 PM
"Faulty Haiku" - lol... working on my mess for some time.


lament of the packrat

plenty familiar
old bills, cards, mathoms scattered
treasures 'suredly

7/18/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-19-2022, 02:33 PM
Mathoms

Past excursions
leave tinkering trails of
foreign landscapes.

tailor STATELY
07-20-2022, 02:49 AM
lol :)


dusky moon

a new dusky moon
sentinel - attends the night
clouds betray the stars

7/19/2022

Not tonight...

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-20-2022, 01:40 PM
Loved particularly the last verse

Shadows of warriors
Glide along the lake.
Water mirrors them.

tonywalt
07-20-2022, 04:03 PM
Loved particularly the last verse

Shadows of warriors
Glide along the lake.
Water mirrors them.

Great imagery.

tonywalt
07-20-2022, 04:10 PM
billions of people
but still i choose to sit here
(need to get some friends)

tailor STATELY
07-21-2022, 01:43 AM
:) Enjoyed both.


lame/limp (sprained my instep)

so dreadful afoot
sprain - an arduous hobbling
because of the pain

7/20/2022


life's afoot

all's afoot when all
is well - till pain takes you down
out of step with life

7/20/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-21-2022, 07:57 AM
Great imagery.

Thanks, Tony!

Danik 2016
07-21-2022, 08:01 AM
billions of people
but still i choose to sit here
(need to get some friends)

Maybe new people.
Friends, girls, the world is huge.
But don´t forget us.

Danik 2016
07-21-2022, 08:13 AM
double because of editing

Danik 2016
07-21-2022, 08:19 AM
Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
Enjoyed both.

lame/limp
(sprained my instep)

so dreadful afoot
sprain - an arduous hobbling
because of the pain

7/20/2022

life's afoot

all's afoot when all
is well - till pain takes you down
out of step with life

7/20/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor


Oh my! That sounds real. Didn´t enjoy the content but appreciated the humor!


An injured foot
demands tender attention.
Ice, pillow and rest.

https://www.drugs.com/health-guide/foot-sprain.html
#Stay home as much as you can and stay well

tailor STATELY
07-22-2022, 06:26 AM
Yes, unfortunately real. All I was doing was walking in a store when I felt something like a pop... X-rays negative so just a ligament in my instep that decided to act up. $90 USD later I was good to go with a foot wrap and OTC meds and Lidocaine patch. Wish I could be inactive... stuff to do.


rainclouds

just beyond the pale
mischievous rainclouds survey
glistening rooftops

7/22/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-22-2022, 01:36 PM
Good that you were x-rayed and medicated immediately. The feet represent the independence of so young people as we. Wish you a quick recover.

A charming poem


The Horizon

Always receding
the limit of future dreams.
Reverie beckons.

tailor STATELY
07-22-2022, 03:11 PM
So true... Thanx ! Beautiful Haiku :)


remorse

with hope remorse fades
to rest from view the long night
and balance restored

7/22/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
07-25-2022, 03:09 AM
time spent

somehow weathered all
in sylvan humility
my golden years blest

7/24/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-25-2022, 02:12 PM
Beautiful!

To all dying cats

Nothing will replace
your unique fluffiness,
and exuberance.

tailor STATELY
07-26-2022, 07:29 AM
So true... :(


deadpan dear

magical foothills
deadpan deer alertly pose
when trespassed upon

7/26/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-26-2022, 09:47 AM
Liked the wordplay!

Summerly winter
stretches its lethargic limbs.
The sun yawns slyly.

tailor STATELY
07-26-2022, 08:26 PM
A moderate winter must be a blessing :)


crimson

crimson sundown wanes
surreal pillow-clouds race the
psychedelic night

7/26/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-27-2022, 02:36 PM
Enjoyed the vignette

Damaged haiku

Tongues of fire
crack open the womb of the
pregnant earth!

tailor STATELY
07-27-2022, 05:45 PM
Cataclysmic ! Staying with the theme...


upheavals

living ring of fire
earth's upheavals terrorize
crushing tragedies

7/27/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
07-30-2022, 03:29 AM
come what may

night advanced slowly
a heavy galactic sleep
awaits the forlorn

7/30/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
07-30-2022, 09:26 AM
Still hoping for better times and sound sleep!

Whatever is up
nature rears flowers to cu-
re indifferences!

tailor STATELY
08-04-2022, 04:30 AM
(me too) Interesting structure... Nice sentiment to balance these times :)


jwst

blazing quietly
stars seek our vision; feeds
imagination

8/4/2022

https://webb.nasa.gov/

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-04-2022, 09:59 AM
Enjoyed the poem and Cartwheel Galaxy.

Meteorites

Mysterious, brilliant
envoys from outer spheres
What is your message?

https://www.cnnbrasil.com.br/nacional/meteoro-superbrilhante-e-visto-em-sao-paulo-e-minas-gerais/(about a meteorite that was sighted in several cities of S. Paulo yesterday)

tailor STATELY
08-05-2022, 07:10 AM
(Oh-Oh. O que você procura não está mais disponível. Que tal visitar nossa home ou buscar algum assunto?) :(
... did find this: https://westobserver.com/news/latin-america/superbright-meteor-seen-in-sao-paulo-and-minas-gerais/ Magnitude of -8 !

Enjoyed your Haiku :)

pardon our interruption

the building blocks of
planetary construction
asteroids, comets

8/5/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-05-2022, 04:47 PM
Yes, it is this one, I couldn´t find anything in English." Some translation problems though: "When he approached, the pressure increased and he exploded in the girls."

Enjoyed the Haiku!

Intergalactic
craziness! Explosions!
But calm reigns supreme!

tailor STATELY
08-05-2022, 07:50 PM
Translation... lol

Enjoyed... reminds me of the calm the Vogons had when they destroyed Earth... ref: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Hitchhiker%27s_Guide_to_the_Galaxy

"... and I feel fine"

dread end of the world
at first asteroids whisk by
then comes the big boom

8/5/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-06-2022, 12:56 PM
Sniff!

Finally with cc in English: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st5qroQvnT8

Much talk around the
end of the world. What about
a new beginning?

tailor STATELY
08-06-2022, 05:09 PM
Great video ! Optimistic Haiku :)

"... here's to the new boss"

beings are planning
a new beginning, but not
homo sapiens

8/6/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
08-08-2022, 07:30 AM
august rain

an august surprise
monsoon clouds bestowed light rains
upon parched foothills

8/8/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-08-2022, 10:04 AM
Enjoyed your vignette

Clouded Morning

Gray monotony.
The sky mirrors itself in
the drying puddles.

tailor STATELY
08-09-2022, 07:57 AM
Glad it's drying up :)


a skunk


a skunk passed by home
in the dark of night unseen
made its presence known

8/9/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-09-2022, 08:42 AM
Lol!

An magic instant

A prying bird, hops
on the window sill its black
eyes roam. It departs.

tailor STATELY
08-09-2022, 09:08 AM
re: a skunk... true story: this morning about 3:00 am while trying to cool the house down with window open.

Love it :)


the mantis


humid afternoon
alert green mantis praying,
swaying, saying grace

8/9/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
08-10-2022, 09:35 PM
tranquility

suggestively lithe
lightly breezed tree limbs swaying
sows tranquility

8/10/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-11-2022, 09:14 AM
Enjoyed both poems. In Portuguese the mantis is called Louva-Deus (praise God!)

Winter day

Patches of cold sun,
Heaven wearing a hesi-
tant blue! Harmony!

tailor STATELY
08-12-2022, 06:03 AM
Enjoyed both poems. In Portuguese the mantis is called Louva-Deus (praise God!)

Winter day

Patches of cold sun,
Heaven wearing a hesi-
tant blue! Harmony!

"Louva-Deus"... much better than Praying Mantis :)

Enjoyed you Haiku very much: "Heaven wearing a hesi-
tant blue!"

... back soon

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
08-12-2022, 07:38 AM
sturionic supermoon

bright supermoon beams
a pine martin's eyes glow bright
whilst skunks scamper near

8/12/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-12-2022, 08:19 AM
Enjoyed!

Urban night
The coldest of moons,
Noisy neighbors hover around
Dog howls can be heard.

tailor STATELY
08-13-2022, 07:12 AM
"The coldest of moons,"... great first line - enjoyed your Haiku :)


crickets

cool down mid of night
crickets chirp rapid cadence
full moon, dim lit stars

8/13/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
08-14-2022, 12:29 AM
moon færies... an ekphrastic haiku

cold pale moon rising
færies dance midst water mists
midsummer night's eve

https://www.starmythworld.com/mathisencorollary/2018/7/1/lvalek-or-the-dancing-fairies-by-august-malmstrm

8/13/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-14-2022, 11:15 AM
Enjoyed both moon Haikus and the painting is pure magic, thanks for the link( still have to finish reading the comment)!

Sunday noon

Frolicking dogs bark
happily; humans en-
grossed by their cells.

tailor STATELY
08-15-2022, 09:01 AM
An interesting commentary on the new age... enjoyed.

'bout an hour ago...


monday morn

monday morn so black
stars prevail - no hint of dawn
before gegenschein

8/15/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-15-2022, 09:21 AM
Oh!

Gegenschein,

Sleepless nights,
a lit window opposite
brings morning relief.

tailor STATELY
08-15-2022, 09:30 AM
Very nice ! I can relate...


sunrise!

sunrise ! a new day
dawned just now, soft blue skies - I
turn my thoughts to sleep

8/15/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
08-16-2022, 04:40 AM
mosses/lichen

mosses mingle 'neath
old man's beard and witch's hair
draped on dank tree limbs

8/16/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-16-2022, 08:04 AM
Enjoyed both haikus specially the last one.

Ghosts

White weird shapes
people the night. The sun re-
veals harmless blankets.

tailor STATELY
08-17-2022, 06:44 AM
Them ghosts is tricksy !


apparitions

chilly eventide
dank apparitions go bump
in the night - seeking

8/17/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-18-2022, 09:47 AM
Ja!

Nightly unruly
shapes? The sun brings them out
with light, life, colors!

tailor STATELY
08-19-2022, 01:20 AM
With light, life :)


hidden by hedgerows

hidden by hedgerows
færies sing in the dawning
magic light of day

8/18/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-19-2022, 10:02 AM
Magical! :)

Drizzle

Soaked landscapes!
Dusty nature retires,
choses new garments

tailor STATELY
08-20-2022, 04:24 AM
:) Dusty here.


heatwave

scorching summertime
a living heatwave simmers
wavelength uncertain

8/20/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-20-2022, 08:34 AM
Cold spell

The chill extends its
damp fingers. Morning sun tries
to break the grim spell.

tailor STATELY
08-21-2022, 01:06 AM
brrrr !


emerald memories

bright green sea lettuce
makes for vibrant emerald waves
break upon the shore

8/20/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-28-2022, 08:39 AM
:)

Sun Day

Soft, familiar noi-
ses erasing tumults of
every day life.

tailor STATELY
08-29-2022, 04:01 AM
Very serene :)


serene

soon after midnight
crickets happily chirping
peaceful reflections

8/29/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-29-2022, 07:09 AM
Enjoyed! :)

Rain

Softly immersed
in water, the world looks small.
Bird songs persevere!

tailor STATELY
08-30-2022, 06:35 AM
Very nice :)


mirror mare

double reflection
stars glide in a fantasy
moonlight sonata

8/30/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-30-2022, 04:46 PM
Loved it!

Winter

Cold flying fingers
grasp the air. The sun is just
kind of ornament.

tailor STATELY
08-31-2022, 03:15 AM
I envy your winter; we're set for a heat wave: https://weather.com/weather/tenday/l/Garden+Valley+CA?canonicalCityId=15fe24f909cd9a5de 1cc11fef53d35d972f77e971f53a86d6c470ce44ebd8182


heat wave

no need to fly high
as Icarus to his doom
fierce our home star

8/31/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-31-2022, 03:47 PM
It looks bad, specially as the grades are in Fº. A German digital friend told me they had 32ºC there yesterday.
But the heat wave is bound to come soon. Probably in spring as the coldest month this year here was May.

Climate Change (damaged haiku)

Cold waves in Autumn
Heat in Spring. What has become
Of Summer and Winter?

tailor STATELY
09-02-2022, 08:18 AM
Yes, prolly climate changes... 32º C / 89.6º F is warm enough for me... 'tis 78º F at 5:00 am indoors with the window open just now.


green bananas

bananas too green
such a heavy snack to eat
more pithy than sweet

9/2/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-02-2022, 02:23 PM
LoL! Here people use to wrap them in newspaper for a quicker maturing.


Fruits thrive briskly
under the kiss of the sun.
Tiny birds rejoice.

tailor STATELY
09-03-2022, 03:27 AM
:)


thirst

sweltering sundown
ruby hummingbird flivvers
in search of water

9/3/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-04-2022, 12:30 PM
Enjoying with warm tea

tailor STATELY
09-06-2022, 06:12 AM
lake havasu haboob

surprise dust storm comes
an impromptu haboob, with
lightning in the wind

9/6/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-06-2022, 04:09 PM
Enjoyed!

Independence day( tomorrow)

Twohundred years of
independence. Have we
reaped war or peace?

tailor STATELY
09-06-2022, 07:21 PM
Thanx... a recent event where my wife is vacationing... she thought a tornado was coming from the signs in the sky :)

Enjoyed your poem. Hoping for peace; the people of Brasil are resilient !

fahrenheit rising

fahrenheit rising
now 1-0-7 outdoors
97 in

9/6/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-07-2022, 08:43 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Tailor! It´s not quite sure if anything is going to happen today, St Peter sent rain, which is fine. Hope your wife is well under shelter, they are no joke this tornados.

Enjoyed the poem but not the temperature!

Rainy Celebrations (damaged haiku)

A rare rain shrouds
the so active city.
Melancholy!

tailor STATELY
09-07-2022, 12:08 PM
No tornados (thank heavens)... just an 80 mile/129 km long (on some reports) curtain of dust/sand storm generating its own lightning... wish I'd seen it :)

Pondered your poem after reading prognostications for your holiday earlier today...


muffle

rain may damp spirits
yet muffle mischievousness
where hooligans roam

9/7/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-07-2022, 02:00 PM
:) Military parades, but so far all seems calm.


Soldiers parade

attired in red and gold.

Is this still Brazil?

tailor STATELY
09-08-2022, 06:26 AM
Glad to hear :) Red and gold sounds like a good combination.


mosquito fire 3 am

smoke is in the air
ashes slowly drifting down
settling everywhere

9/8/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-08-2022, 08:56 AM
Heard about it in the news. Hopefully it will be extinguished soon and won´t reach your area

The day after the holyday

A hesitant sun

is back. Thursday or Monday

morning? Calmness reigns!

tailor STATELY
09-18-2022, 12:55 AM
:)

We're still safe with an evacuation warning... people have started to go to their homes as mandatory evacuations are being lifted here and there. Rain in the forecast :)

mosquito fire 2022

evac warnings still
safe as rain in the forecast
fire rages near

9/17/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-18-2022, 08:41 PM
Why is it called Mosquito fire?

Water against fire
Devastating flames!
Rain cures the open wounds
of the soil. New life!

tailor STATELY
09-19-2022, 07:39 AM
Mosquito fire:
The fire began at approximately 6:27 PM PDT on September 6, 2022, near Mosquito Ridge Road (for which it was named), above Oxbow Reservoir in the Middle Fork American River drainage on the western slope of the Sierra Nevada.... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mosquito_Fire

Love the optimism of new life !


reine

blessed angels dance as
Terpsichore plays her lyre
flames gaze at rainbows

9/19/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-21-2022, 12:24 PM
Magical!

Rainy Spring Day

The sun smiles lightly
attired in grumpy clouds.
Earth sulks below.

tailor STATELY
09-21-2022, 07:07 PM
Wonderful contrast of moods :)

late summer reigns

a hummingbird sips
from ivy on a rapt oak
intermittent rain

9/21/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-22-2022, 01:55 PM
A cute vignette!

The Protagonist

He sings at the first
hint of dawn and all day long,
His heart in his throat!

tailor STATELY
09-23-2022, 07:06 AM
Very nice :)

autumn's appearance

autumn's appearance
showcases sierra clouds
out in the distance

9/23/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-26-2022, 02:12 PM
Liked it :)

Spring rain

Welcome waters
of September. heralding
flowery seasons.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UIckBQ2DXQ4

tailor STATELY
09-26-2022, 02:44 PM
Enjoyed... Beautiful flowers :) ... enjoy your spring.


gracious early fall

gracious early fall
summer yet to loose her grip
despite the light breeze

9/25/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-27-2022, 09:09 AM
Thanks!

Dentist

Friendliness, unsus-
picious looking machine.
Teeth don´t enjoy it!

tailor STATELY
09-27-2022, 01:14 PM
Ai !


Pantanal

jaguars hunt caiman
stoic capybaras gaze
adopt a macaw

9/27/2022

ref: https://www.worldwildlife.org/stories/5-interesting-facts-about-the-pantanal-the-world-s-largest-tropical-wetland

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-27-2022, 02:52 PM
Thanks for the link, tailor. Sadly the wet areas have been turned into dry areas in the last years with fires raging like in California. The difference is, that most of these areas seem to be inhabited by wildlife and birds but hardly by men. This video was shot in 2012. Things have gone much worde since then:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xYJ5isWlkbY

Quagmire

Wild waters recede
on flatlands abandoned
by shrinking wildlife.

tailor STATELY
09-28-2022, 01:12 AM
So sorry to hear :(


droughts

I hear the laments
as far watercourses sigh
stars withhold their tears

9/27/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
09-30-2022, 12:43 AM
I was amazed today at the number of honey bees, and a few bumblebees et al, busying themselves on the much maligned Yellow StarThistle... http://southwestdesertflora.com/WebsiteFolders/All_Species/Asteraceae/Centaurea%20solstitialis,%20Yellow%20Star-thistle.html


late september's buzz


lowly starthistles
reign with bright yellow florets

virtue bees extol

9/29/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
09-30-2022, 10:14 AM
Maybe they have less food choices, what with fires and other accidents that devastate the plants.

Bumble, bumble bee,
what kind of flower dishes
Nature has for thee?

tailor STATELY
09-30-2022, 03:19 PM
:) Soon there will be fewer choices for the bees (sigh).

a pity the plant is so invasive & harmful otherwise



from my brief study


upon the web; starthistle


honey highly prized

9/30/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
10-09-2022, 05:31 AM
nefelibata

dance to the beat of
your soul; let the heart follow
harmoniously

10/9/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
10-09-2022, 08:08 AM
:):)
Slept enough tonight. Hoping for positive impact on versification!

Sun Day!

If the day is bright
let the light come in! Revel
in radiance.

tailor STATELY
10-13-2022, 03:07 AM
Wonderful :)


my love sleeps

even falls heavy
the discomforted sleeps; a
sound of sawing logs

10/13/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
10-15-2022, 01:26 PM
:)

Lazy afternoon

Sleepiness is in
the air with people gently
falling asleep z!

tailor STATELY
10-15-2022, 02:35 PM
:)


saturday

tranquil green leaves wave
a makeshift birdbath invites
late serene morning

10/15/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
10-26-2022, 05:31 AM
wood smoke

the wood stove is stoked
an old iron misfit black
leaks and chuffs sometimes

10/26/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
10-26-2022, 07:29 AM
Enjoyed both last haikus, specially Saturday!

Wednesdays

Walking to workplace

Mornings dogging on

Evening football

tailor STATELY
10-27-2022, 03:04 AM
Busy schedule :)


a driving day

cool clear afternoon
lazy wednesday rendezvous
putting on the mile$

10/26/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
10-29-2022, 12:46 AM
Damascus

my brakes are grinding
wake up and smell the coffee
Damascus must wait

10/28/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
11-09-2022, 08:53 AM
buffering

darkest before dawn
beyond internet's set cap
buffering balloons

11/9/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
11-29-2022, 06:57 PM
fall advanced quickly

fall advanced quickly
awaiting the perfect rime
clear bright air whispers

11/29/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
11-29-2022, 10:16 PM
Enjoyed!
Stormy days
Clouds spin a dark rug
Water pours down from heaven.
Puddles grace the soil!

tailor STATELY
12-01-2022, 08:54 AM
Love this: "Clouds spin a dark rug" :)


inclement weather

changeable foothills
robins are hunkering down
woodpiles diminish

12/1/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
12-01-2022, 09:41 AM
:)

Friendly morning air

Planes think themselves big birds

Beaming sunshine prevails.

tailor STATELY
12-02-2022, 09:34 AM
Enjoyed :)


iridian hopes

trying to keep bright
in a time of affliction
iridian hopes

12/2/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
12-02-2022, 03:50 PM
Loku

Clouds
Clouds have silver
linings, hide the friendly sun
and father rainbows!

tailor STATELY
12-02-2022, 07:09 PM
Cheerful Loku ! My previous attempt (#732) started out in a more negative vane: dreary day blah blues/gray cloudy disposition/more of same forecast... but I decided to turn my frown upside down :)

færies (revisited)

sunny afternoon
I ponder færies at mirth
I muse reposing

12/2/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
12-15-2022, 02:03 AM
winter's nigh

a light chill wind blows
just a week before winter
penetrates the bones

12/14/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
12-15-2022, 07:15 AM
Respite

Birds welcome the cold
A day of sunny respite
among heat waves.

tailor STATELY
12-16-2022, 12:26 AM
Enjoyed :) Your weather must be nice.


awaiting moonrise


fog upon my breath
stars so bright in the sharp air

awaiting moonrise

12/15/2022

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
01-22-2023, 04:48 AM
derecho

fox squirrel beneath
clutching an oak's bole closely
greenish glowing sky

1/22/2023

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
01-22-2023, 08:17 AM
Thanks, tailor. Was thinking of resurrecting this thread.

Atmospheric Haiku!

Summer Sunday

Just the synchronized
bark of the parading dogs
and the glaring sun!

tailor STATELY
01-23-2023, 10:01 AM
Delightful :)


sublime as poets

sublime as poets
secrets of bucolic soul
listen to the bees

1/23/2023

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tailor STATELY
01-29-2023, 04:35 AM
at play

playful shadows ran
through whispers in the garden
outrun by children

1/29/2023

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
01-29-2023, 08:31 AM
Charming Haikus, specially the last one! Was thinking of ressurecting this page.

Sundaying
A glorious sunshine
Spills its warm glow on the plain.
Lazy peace abounds

tailor STATELY
01-30-2023, 07:13 AM
Enjoyed :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
02-01-2023, 09:36 AM
Umbrella
A bird takes the word
under his powerful wings.
Small beings abound!

tailor STATELY
02-01-2023, 06:32 PM
Quite evocative... enjoyed :)

roll along winter

roll along winter
bare oaks and melancholy
may spring be recalled

2/1/2023

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
02-02-2023, 08:38 AM
Hoping for an early spring/autumn

Sample of urban summer

Heat, rain,massive floods!
Avenues turned in-
to gushing rivers!

tailor STATELY
02-04-2023, 06:26 AM
:( Except for the heat that has been our winter.

wintertime blues

pitch perfect frogs sing
basal musicality
wintertime blues blare

2/4/2023

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
02-04-2023, 09:47 AM
Charming!

A Grey Summer

Summer without sun
Almost! Grey rays cut the heat.
Apathy prevails.

tailor STATELY
02-04-2023, 07:02 PM
Enjoyed :) Prompted me thus:


no rime

gray blankets our hills
a respite from winter's bite
from the cold of space

2/4/2023

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
02-05-2023, 08:39 AM
Loved the image of the blanket!


Sun and rain dance
an alternate Tango!
Birds sing airily!