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Danik 2016
04-13-2022, 12:50 PM
re: Thanks! Petrichor. Learned that the smell of rain has an own name! Liked the onomatopeia of your breakfast.
Lunch
White extensions
of rice dominate
the small battlefield!
tailor STATELY
04-14-2022, 06:01 AM
Thanx... enjoyed your poem :)
stone frog
early drizzly bound
a spotted stone frog soaking
near a garden gnome
4/14/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Danik 2016
04-14-2022, 08:31 AM
Liked that image. Enjoying writing Haikus, they are a good image training. Still having much difficulty though with the more extensive forms.
Early morning sun
Doggy happiness abounds
Pensive doves!
tailor STATELY
04-14-2022, 09:01 AM
Another bright image :)
Haikus were among my favorite poetic training exercises... their brevity an aesthetic expression. Studying Basho's poetry is an illumination.
breathe
haiku brevity
polished stones in a cool stream
give aesthetic breath
4/14/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
tailor STATELY
04-16-2022, 12:11 PM
chicken dinner
strangled eventide
a little, plump chicken roars
before the ax falls
4/16/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Danik 2016
04-17-2022, 06:29 PM
:( Grrrrrrrrrrrr!
tailor STATELY
04-18-2022, 04:26 AM
More of a country life vignette I guess... ~ 81% generated. Btb: get my chxn at the store... and
chxn eggs have gone from $13/5-dozen to $18/5-dozen very quickly here (which had fluctuated from $8/5-dozen to $10/5-dozen seasonally at the big box stores last year - all prices USD)... Avian flu and new Farm Regulatory laws related. $5/dozen by local farm providers now. I will be scaling down my egg breakfasts accordingly. May have to buy some chxns.
bedraggled
showery foreshore
an eagle perches nearby
drenched, beyond annoyed
4/18/2022
https://www.newyorker.com/culture/susan-orlean/wet-feathers#:~:text=The%20word%20“bedraggled”%20was%2 0invented,fowl%20in%20a%20tropical%20storm.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Danik 2016
04-18-2022, 08:22 AM
re: Not appropriate "country life vignette" if one loves animals, though I own buying chicken in stores makes one forget, that they were killed. One of my frustrations is that I didn´t manage to become vegetarian. Meat of all sorts and eggs prices have increased greatly here also, with a two digit inflation. Hardly it eggs any more, because of intolerance. Always wondered and envied the robust Nord American stomachs that tolerate FRIED eggs for breakfast. I hope you find a good substitute, scaling a bit down might be positive for cholesterol.
Perched on the roofs
Birds enjoy the view
Feasting on their fleas.
tailor STATELY
04-18-2022, 03:13 PM
re: Not appropriate "country life vignette" if one loves animals, though I own buying chicken in stores makes one forget, that they were killed. One of my frustrations is that I didn´t manage to become vegetarian. Meat of all sorts and eggs prices have increased greatly here also, with a two digit inflation. Hardly it eggs any more, because of intolerance. Always wondered and envied the robust Nord American stomachs that tolerate FRIED eggs for breakfast. I hope you find a good substitute, scaling a bit down might be positive for cholesterol.
Perched on the roofs
Birds enjoy the view
Feasting on their fleas.
Re: cholesterol... I have averaged eating 5-dozen eggs a month for more years than I can remember and my latest value is 144 from my blood donation recap letter results dated 2/8/2022... which is in the acceptable range... It's never been high for some reason (genetics?).
Love your haiku ! The birds are very abundant here now that spring on this side of the equator is in full gear.
tiny frogs
cheerful sunny creek
tiny frogs serenading
shiny old pebbles
4/18/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
tailor STATELY
04-20-2022, 06:03 AM
desert moon
darkening sand dunes
still shimmer from the day's heat
a cold moon rises
4/20/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
tailor STATELY
04-21-2022, 08:28 AM
♥
a mid-day struggle
a carver in the forest
pocket knife in hand
4/21/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Danik 2016
04-21-2022, 12:15 PM
desert moon
darkening sand dunes
still shimmer from the day's heat
a cold moon rises
4/20/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Suitable https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FuRfnASBwpg
Danik 2016
04-21-2022, 12:25 PM
One tiny ant
carries a sugar trophy
Gigantic tea cups.
tailor STATELY
04-21-2022, 03:44 PM
Miss the genius of Nat King Cole... Your Haiku reminded me of the song "High Hopes" where an ant aspires to move a rubber tree plant :)
oblivious
bobbing to and fro
a log floats idly downstream
clunking against stones
4/21/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
tailor STATELY
04-22-2022, 07:30 AM
too oft
starlight eventide
comets traverse the heavens
too oft out of sight
4/22/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Danik 2016
04-22-2022, 08:17 AM
True!
Tardigrades swim
Deep down watery domains.
Starlight shows the way.
tailor STATELY
04-22-2022, 11:14 AM
There's them tardigrades again... ubiquitous little critters :)
seals
searching for her pup
a lone mother fur seal barks
where leopard seals skulk
4/22/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Danik 2016
04-22-2022, 12:34 PM
AI!
Forest of flowers
Tumble down the wall
Birds remain cautious.
tailor STATELY
04-22-2022, 02:09 PM
Speaking of birds...
baseball
empowered boobirds
nesting in the catbird seats
enjoying pure bliss
4/22/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
tailor STATELY
04-24-2022, 01:58 AM
box turtle
on damp matted reeds
a box turtle suns itself
dank cool pond beckons
4/22/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Danik 2016
04-24-2022, 07:50 AM
AI!
To a white cat with a black tail
Napping drowsily,
White cat behind the net,
Dreaming of freedom.
tailor STATELY
04-25-2022, 01:50 AM
Cat poetry !
divide poets society
sunny reception
patrons on the divide bask
centered on a hen
4/24/2022
or
divide poets society #2
sunny reception
patrons of the arts basking
centered on a hen
4/24/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
04-26-2022, 03:09 AM
fog
ocean side daydream
a cool salty fog wanders
leisurely rolling
4/26/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
04-26-2022, 10:08 AM
Like this frog images
Erratic pebbles
Wandering down crunchy
beaches, aimlessly.
tailor STATELY
04-26-2022, 12:57 PM
Beach vibe :) ... continued...
jelly
Unfriendly capture
A squishy, dank jelly stings
found in the seaweed
4/26/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
04-27-2022, 04:34 AM
raccoon
after break of day
a small bushy raccoon plays
enjoying the rain
4/27/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
04-29-2022, 04:05 AM
kite
naughty aurora
kissing a long tailed kite's skies
a glowing shimmer
4/29/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
04-29-2022, 07:46 AM
raccoon
after break of day
a small bushy raccoon plays
enjoying the rain
4/27/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
AAAIII!
Little beach turtles
Rapidly moving their legs
Sea awaits their eggs
tailor STATELY
04-29-2022, 08:47 AM
Love it :)
will-o'-wisp
through the cool marish
a sultry will-o'-wisp drifts
as ev'n tide draws near
4/29/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
05-01-2022, 02:56 AM
pebbles in flight
beatified sun
a delightful rain presumes
pebbles take up flight
4/30/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
05-02-2022, 02:49 AM
lament
wearisome night falls
a large, marshy bog whimpers
forsaken by sprites
5/1/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-02-2022, 07:52 AM
Sad, but...
Morning
Clad in sunrise
Noisy city awakes
Night ghosts take flight!
tailor STATELY
05-03-2022, 09:42 AM
:) Ghost fun facts... https://ohfact.com/interesting-facts-about-ghosts/
city nights
on deep reflection
in shop windows they appear
ghosts walking the streets
5/3/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-04-2022, 09:59 AM
Lol! Interesting image play. re:Enjoyed the link. Wanted to present Pluft, the little friendly Ghost a play by Maria Clara Machedo, but found no link in English.
Ghosts
Sudden movements
White desolate sheets
flutter in the wind...
tailor STATELY
05-05-2022, 12:21 PM
An English thumbnail sketch of Pluft: https://cinando.com/en/Film/pluft_184524/Detail (I found she also wrote The King's tailor :) )
moistly ghostly
supernatural
a little moistly toad sits
by the curlicues
5/5/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
05-06-2022, 02:56 AM
yarrow's demise
dawn wakes the new day
a wilting yarrow writhes
cries with daffodil
5/5/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-06-2022, 10:42 AM
Enjoyed both Haikus. Thanks for the Pluft link, Tailor. Finally found the classical Pluft image I was looking for:
https://br.pinterest.com/pin/492018328011014128/?mt=login
Pluft
Of human badness
Dressed in gorgeous arrays
I was much afraid.
Me, such a small ghost
The unfathomable world
So full of anger!
tailor STATELY
05-06-2022, 03:40 PM
The br.pinterest link wouldn't work for some reason so I just took the br. prefix off and got a result that ultimately led me to https://www.youtube.com/watch?reload=9&v=q3EuT9QMVoc which is a delightful production of a Pluft play. More than 20 minutes in a few influences to catch my eye/ear: Baha Men's "Who Let the Dogs Out", The Monkeys' "I'm a Believer", and Mancini's classic "Pink Panther"... quite cute. I couldn't follow all that was going on due to my ignorance of the language, but I got the main idea :) Found a few images of Pluft too ! Your double Haiku "Pluft" is wonderful !
meandering thoughts
an overcast sky
a lightsome, lazy wind blows
a promise of rain ?
5/6/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
05-08-2022, 01:36 AM
the chase
for kicks and giggles
færies ride upon tree frogs
chasing dragonflies
5/7/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-08-2022, 10:11 AM
Cute poem!
The squirrel
A squinting squirrel
posing with a tasty nut
graces Central Park
tailor STATELY
05-09-2022, 10:19 AM
:)
reflective
a teddy bear stares
at a stuffed alligator
glass eyes reflective
5/9/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-10-2022, 09:02 AM
Loved the word play!
Fading light
Vanishing sunbeams
In the horizon, may dusk
fall lightly on us
tailor STATELY
05-11-2022, 07:19 PM
Loved this :)
noisome
noisome delta dawn
sonorous cicadas buzz
frogs chirrump and peep
5/11/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-12-2022, 08:45 AM
Loved it!
Damaged Haiku
If you get a cold
Because you are old
It isn´t the wold.
tailor STATELY
05-12-2022, 07:33 PM
lol... hoping you are well.
two donkeys
sunshine and windy
two donkeys feed at leisure
among the shade trees
5/12/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-13-2022, 12:48 PM
Loved the image. Yes, it´s a self consolatory poem, but the cold is getting better already, thanks!
Sleepy afternoon
Under the fading sunlight
the workers doze.
tailor STATELY
05-14-2022, 08:04 AM
Glad to know :) Liked your vignette too.
sand castles
sultry ocean side
heavy, quiet clouds passing
over sand castles
5/14/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-14-2022, 10:47 AM
Thanks! Liked yours very much too, specially it´s double meaning.
The village sleeps
one lonely rooster
advertises dawn.
tailor STATELY
05-14-2022, 03:15 PM
lol... now I see it ! A neighbor used to have a rooster about 1/4 mile (0.42 km) away that seemed to crow all the time that echoed through our little valley.
rusted
magical desert
a rusted car supplies shade
gila monsters grin
5/14/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
05-19-2022, 07:52 PM
simple needs
coneflowers abound
their cheerful blossoms provide
a bee's simple needs
5/19/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-20-2022, 07:13 AM
Dutifully looked up gila monsters:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gila_monster. Ejoyed specially the bees' haiku.
Wild winds still abound
Without exasperation,
Tiny doves rest.
tailor STATELY
05-21-2022, 03:02 AM
Lol... dutifully ? There's an old campy SciFi movie called "The Giant Gila Monster"... wikipedia: (spoilers)... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Giant_Gila_Monster
Enjoyed the Haiku... hoping the doves weather the storm.
spider fails
a dewy morning
a spider crawls sheepishly
betrayed by its web
5/21/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-21-2022, 06:48 AM
Loath spiders, but this one is endearing.
Lazy awakenings
Mornings cold breeze
prevails, waves subside
Streets move their legs.
tailor STATELY
05-21-2022, 07:18 AM
lol... I save spiders and get them out-of-doors with mixed results (currently recovering from obligatory spider bite).
Love "streets move their legs"... very urbane.
beside a still pond
beside a still pond
dulcet bird songs orchestrate
as day breaks - crisp, cool
5/21/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-21-2022, 11:45 AM
re: Spiders- (lol)If you really have to pet them, can´t you do it wearing those thick rubber gloves you surely have at home?
a harmonic vignette!
Saturdays/Sundays
Somehow the town
(yawning in the midday sun)
is not at home.
tailor STATELY
05-22-2022, 08:47 AM
re: spiders - yes
Sounds like a comfortable day :)
birds sing
The day yet to break
and birds sing before the dawn
- marvelous Sabbath
5/22/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-22-2022, 09:23 AM
Just like here, when the birds are not impelled to sing at midnight.
Praça Roosevelt on Sunday morning
A deserted place
then birds, fast paced people
morning breaks, dogs sing.
tailor STATELY
05-23-2022, 05:13 PM
Googled Praça Roosevelt... beautiful urban space... must have been nice to have it for your own for a time.
mountain meadow
lush mountain meadow
a fox halts by a poppy
gentle crisp winds blow
5/23/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
05-25-2022, 04:32 AM
plenty
beneath a hedgerow
an excited stoat kit chirps
as beechnuts are reaped
5/25/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-25-2022, 10:33 AM
Enjoyed both haikus. Wondering at the natural presence of foxes in more rural US( Thinking also of bluebiirds accounts, about the foxes near her house). re Praça Roosvelt: Tried to upload a picture I made of Praça Roosevelt with my Android from my window, but it didn´t work.:(
Loneliness
A little bird chirps
And listens for an answer
No one answers him.
tailor STATELY
05-25-2022, 12:59 PM
Love your Haiku... a touch of melancholy.
We have many foxes and blue birds (mostly Jays) here in Garden Valley... had a mountain lion on our property yesterday; bears once in a while. We have Pine Martins and other weasely kin, but the Stoat poem plenty was pure whimsy after a bit of woolgathering and googling.
beguine
a pungent beguine
clouds lazily rain upon
a honeysuckle
5/25/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-26-2022, 05:37 AM
Poor honeysuckle
re:"had a mountain lion on our property yesterday; bears once in a while" Are they pacific or do they try to attack? (if the question sounds to silly I only ever saw lions in the zoo or on a screen).
The lion
Early sunrise
A lion crosses the streets
His fur resplendent.
tailor STATELY
05-27-2022, 05:49 AM
Enjoyed the Haiku :)
Most wild animals out here stay away from people, but there are sightings... only a few animal stalkings and one death in memory nearby... https://www.latimes.com/archives/la-xpm-1994-04-26-mn-50703-story.html . Bears will enter homes and cars if they can when they smell food, but rarely happens here in the foothills where they're more likely to raid garbage cans... more problematic in Lake Tahoe (higher elevations)... https://wildlife.ca.gov/Conservation/Mammals/Black-Bear/Blog/ArticlePage/4/cid/126?category=south-lake-tahoe
grumpy toad
bewitching this day
a green, grumpy toad wallows
whilst watching the ants
5/27/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-27-2022, 07:27 AM
re: I guess, you all got used to these eventual visitors. Once in Canada I saw in the news that a big bear had bear attracted by the swimming pool of a mansion. Alas, here the garbage cans are raided by humans.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mEEuNmSS0m4
Bubaloo Bear
Meet Bubaloo bear
He lives around here
And enjoys brown beer
tailor STATELY
05-27-2022, 08:32 PM
Music: LOL !!! https://www.google.com/search?q=Grumpy+toad+meme&newwindow=1&client=opera&hs=LBn&sxsrf=ALiCzsZ2JjdZ3k_s4qBLDTfATpTVAlYyPQ:165369358 7256&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjDtNfW6ID4AhXaG80KHWW8DxkQ_AUoAXoECAEQA w
Poem: a very happy Bubaloo bear !
white-tailed hawk
whilst watching the lake
a white-tailed hawk shrieked out loud
my freed spirit soared
5/27/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
05-29-2022, 04:56 AM
gray owl
gray owl's mountain view
preparing for silent flight
rustling movement near
5/29/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-29-2022, 08:34 AM
:blush5:Seems I got so perplexed about the meaning of the haiku in # 565 that I forgot to come back. Liked grey owl
Walking down the street
Pondering about life
Meditative birds.
tailor STATELY
05-30-2022, 04:01 AM
lol...
Enjoyed the contemplative mood :)
bear cub
his mother near, a
black bear cub climbs a sapling
- eludes a stink bug
5/30/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-30-2022, 08:18 AM
AAII! You have quite a collection of cute animal poems for your page, I think!
The llama
A haughty llama
Ponders superciliously
On human frailties
tailor STATELY
05-30-2022, 03:56 PM
Super ! Your collection of verse is growing too :)
two black scorpions
two scorpions fret
huddled in a shale rock crease
no longer hidden
5/30/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
05-31-2022, 02:09 PM
Poor scorpions
Conflicts
The poor verse sulks
not heading his neighbor's grief
or rhymed despair.
tailor STATELY
06-01-2022, 03:50 AM
re: scorpions - a true story: about 20 years ago my then only grandson and I took a short walk up the road and stopped at a small hillside of shale and absent-mindedly took of a few hand-sized sheet-chunks of loosened shale off the side to reveal the scorpions; 2-black scorpions just minding their own business... we left them alone... hope they found a new hide-out.
Love the literary poem :)
at the beach, again
foggy seaside day
a gentle stream to traverse
beachcombing blanched sands
6/1/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-01-2022, 08:10 AM
re: Yea, scorpions like to hide in dark places. But you didn´t know they were there and they probably regarded it as a chalenge to move their residence.
Liked your seaside poem. It has been a good time since I went to one.
Rainy morning (as in older times)
Shiny puddles hail
torrents of gushing waters,
nosediving trees.
tailor STATELY
06-02-2022, 08:00 AM
re: seaside... sadly me too - used to be a large part of my life: beachcombing/solitude/family/tide pools
Love your poem... nosediving trees is intriguing; happens a lot here.
lakeside
a double rainbow
an island in the lake sings
as it touches shore
6/2/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-03-2022, 08:21 AM
Enchanting vignette!
Noon
A tired morning
Smelling of lunch lazily
enticing the sun
tailor STATELY
06-04-2022, 07:49 AM
My kind of morning :)
marsh færies
a crisp starry night
bats wheel tracking fireflies
while marsh færies dance
6/4/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-07-2022, 08:42 AM
Magical!
Trivial Vignette
Morning sun hiding
in the clouds; a little dog
yawns. Nothing happens.
tailor STATELY
06-08-2022, 08:00 AM
Lol... trivial ?
sn@ils
sheer faced slate hillside
coiled snails venture out early
while the morning reigns
6/8/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-08-2022, 09:13 AM
:smile5:
White clouds grace
the azure sky like
herds of cotton sheep.
tailor STATELY
06-08-2022, 05:20 PM
Love your poem :)
a home on the beach
a home on the beach
I would have honeysuckle
with a driftwood fence
6/8/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-11-2022, 07:29 AM
the curlews / half moon bay
each hot afternoon
several curlews forage
race the inbound tide
6/11/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-11-2022, 08:26 AM
Learned about curlews, graceful birds :)
Urban nights
Laughter, sirens, shouts,
Shrill sounds pervade the streets
Dimming distant stars!
tailor STATELY
06-12-2022, 05:23 AM
Enjoyed the city reflection and the "skyglow" effect... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Skyglow
a home by the sea
sand dollars would be
my currency - if I had
a home by the sea
6/12/2022
stone
perfect starry night
a weatherworn stone observes
the cold universe
6/12/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-12-2022, 01:24 PM
Thanks for the "skyglow" article. Had never thought about it, but one can´t conceive a modern city without it
Charming Haikus. Liked specially the second, though more somber one.
Bookish noses
They don´t get tanned.
Waves are unknown to these
Submerger in words.
Black Holes
Stir heart of darkness,
announce thy empty core.
Brilliant nothingness
tailor STATELY
06-13-2022, 10:26 AM
Thanx ! "Bookish noses": Lol ! Too true ! "Black Holes": an interesting study in such few words.
roly-polys
roly-polys play
their harps and viols bright - as
færies dance with joy!
6/13/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-14-2022, 08:09 AM
bunny
nibbling sweet clover
after twinkled in a trice
life hops eternal
6/14/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-14-2022, 02:42 PM
(AI!)
Devoted to emptiness
Zero verses today
Just a wide extended plain
With nothing on it.
tailor STATELY
06-15-2022, 12:27 PM
Enjoyed !
grief
how the days go on
when grief tugs at our heartstrings
misty through the fog
6/15/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-15-2022, 02:09 PM
Yes!
Aurora
Chirps hunting darkness
Hesitantly lit horizons
Light floods the morning
Inspired by Caetano Veloso's song "Pipoca moderna".
tailor STATELY
06-17-2022, 06:46 AM
I'd love to see the aurora sometime :)
old toad
glassy pond's surface
old toad gazes longingly
at his reflection
6/17/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-17-2022, 01:07 PM
AAII!
Streaks of golden sky
drown in the silent waters.
Sparkling surface
tailor STATELY
06-17-2022, 08:08 PM
re: "Inspired by Caetano Veloso's song "Pipoca moderna".... Found a version by Gilberto Gil...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?reload=9&v=tidY5nZBy1Y
... a different Aurora than I imagined. Off topic, but I just remembered the Aurora Bridge in Seattle when I was a child :) We lived nearby for a while - then moved in to my paternal Grandfather's home (a hoot and many hollers away) after he left for Alaska when my Grandmother passed on... then my maternal Grandmother and 2-Aunts and Uncle moved in to our old home by the Aurora Bridge where we visited quite often.
Love your Haiku... quite tranquil and reflective :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-18-2022, 09:37 AM
squirrels
early eventide
a young mother squirrel frets
her offspring restless
6/18/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-18-2022, 10:22 AM
Cute poem!
re: Didn't know this instrumental version of "Pipoca moderna" :).
When visiting Canada (in the nineties?) we set over to Seattle with a speedboat and stayed there a few hours. I remember the wood houses which are so usual in films.
Silent houses in
a row looking pensive
on a grassy plain.
tailor STATELY
06-18-2022, 08:33 PM
Love the Haiku !
Ah, speedboats in Seattle evoke very strong memories in me as a kid (late 50's/early 60's) :) My Dad had a friend that raced (hydroplanes) and he had a home on either Lake Washington or Union... I almost drowned there. We went to watch many races on the lakes including the manmade Green Lake, also in Seattle.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
06-19-2022, 03:23 AM
liberation
pure toned caresses -
binaural beats liberate
one's innermost light
6/19/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
06-19-2022, 07:55 AM
Intense and synthetic!
Night
The shadows of night
envelop the silent world.
Distant sirens sound.
tailor STATELY
06-20-2022, 04:49 AM
Very nice :)
whispers
when whispers take flight
only to fall feather light
morning is magic
6/20/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-01-2022, 05:44 AM
a long sigh
pastel sunset pales
a cumulus cloud transforms
into a long sigh
7/1/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-02-2022, 12:46 PM
It has the form of a cloud!
Contemporaneous rains
Single water pearls
Then torrents washing the soil,
Destruction follows
tailor STATELY
07-03-2022, 04:49 AM
(sigh) such tragedy from such a simplicity of nature... especially where clearcutting hazards people nearby. Flashfloods can be so unpredictable.
Staying with weather:
tsunami sunrise
feelings are forecast
an atmospheric river
tsunami sunrise
7/3/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-03-2022, 08:07 AM
A bad forecast!
The ants
A tidy queue
triumphs over the sugar
spilt on the table.
tailor STATELY
07-04-2022, 04:46 AM
Love it ! Such fastidious ants !
me boyo
come the arfternoon
an old, sharp whiskey staggers
suggests a wee dram
7/4/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Dark Muse
07-04-2022, 01:52 PM
To Bruno
Majestic beauty
gone as breath within the wind
carried in our hearts
tailor STATELY
07-04-2022, 06:27 PM
Sorry for your loss.
wild hare
in a forest land
a wild hare flees from fire
a cool pond beckons
7/4/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-07-2022, 09:04 AM
downtown
as downtown bustles
pedestrians weave and dodge
with vagility
7/7/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-07-2022, 09:21 AM
Loved the image and specially the word "vagility".
Vagility
There was an egg
looking for new horizons.
It broke its shell.
tailor STATELY
07-07-2022, 11:10 PM
Interesting image... vagility/egg/broke its shell/new horizons
woodrush & thrush
let magic begin
lithe woodrushes snuggle ferns
hermit thrush song thrills
https://www.allaboutbirds.org/guide/Hermit_Thrush/sounds
7/7/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-08-2022, 09:34 AM
Loved the poem. Also the thrush with its little trusted forward chest and its silvery voice.
Bem-te-vi
A brisk Bem te vi
starts the dialogue.
The forest responds.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMAnr-1m-tY
tailor STATELY
07-09-2022, 06:54 AM
Loved the Haiku... Cute bird :) Its song is precious: "I saw you well !"
memorial for susan j
a soft july day
somber sweet remembrances
of love, sports, service
7/9/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-09-2022, 08:07 AM
just one birds tune sounds
in the deserted garden
of wilted flowers.
tailor STATELY
07-09-2022, 08:24 AM
Such a melancholy poem.
bird bath
such jubilation !
an improvised bird bath splash
puddles in the rain
7/9/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-10-2022, 08:00 AM
AAIII!
Splish and Splash
Into the puddle!
Doggy happiness abounds
out of the puddle!
tailor STATELY
07-13-2022, 08:21 AM
Enjoyed "Splish and Splash" :)
scythe
death's artful touch wields
a curved, sharp scythe harvesting
those whose time is ripe
7/13/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-13-2022, 10:29 AM
(alas) Ingenious poem. Hope again that all is well!
Escape
Wish I had two wings
to escape the sorrows
of exit tense.
tailor STATELY
07-13-2022, 06:40 PM
All is well... officiated over a memorial last Friday for a church friend and gave some parting words to her bereaved family... then polished up a 20 minute (or so) talk on Eternal Perspectives which I gave Sunday in church, so I guess I'm still pondering this mortal coil of ours.
Enjoyed your Haiku :)
misty veils
our divine lives
lie shrouded by misty veils
hid from mortal view
7/13/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-14-2022, 07:50 AM
Forgive the question: are you a minister. tailor?
Beautiful haiku!
A drop of water
A drop of water
feeds thousand of creatures
that brave the sun.
tailor STATELY
07-14-2022, 04:06 PM
I'm a Bishop's counselor... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bishop_(Latter_Day_Saints) - see "Bishops in the LDS Church" sub-heading.
Much about a drop of water :)
wassup cocoa ?
fuzzy waking up
warm cocoa not helping much
watching a slight breeze
7/14/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-15-2022, 07:49 AM
Thanks for the enlightening link, tailor!
Lol! No caffeine in that cocoa?
Lame haiku
Disguised as tea
Just fresh from the small faucet
Water for breakfast.
tailor STATELY
07-15-2022, 09:52 AM
Been severely sleep deprived. Lol - yup, definitely some caffeine: "there are roughly 10 milligrams of caffeine per teaspoon, 5*–10 times less than coffee." ref... https://coffeeaffection.com/how-much-caffeine-is-in-cocoa-powder/ and my drink is usually: 1 - tablespoon cocoa and 2 - tablespoon hot chocolate mix in about 375 ml 2% milk mixed with 375 ml water. I used to double the cocoa but cut back :)
That's some weak tea (lol).
poetry at work
coaxing words to play
piquing imagination
poetry at work
7/15/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-15-2022, 03:22 PM
Maybe a walk or working in the garden may help. When I stay much at home I get sleepless too.
Enjoyed the take on poetry! Let´s have a try!
Words, meter, music
blend into a fabric of
meaning. Emotion!
tailor STATELY
07-15-2022, 03:52 PM
Love it ! An Ars Poetica !!
portrait of winter
shamrock plant basking
in a white stoneware pitcher
winter rages by
7/15/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-16-2022, 10:38 AM
Then my warm winter is comforting.
Summer or Winter?
The July sun sheds its rays on
the dry landscape.
tailor STATELY
07-17-2022, 06:26 AM
:)
shadows 7/13/2022
the buck moon shone bright
sharp languid shadows answered
filtered through stark trees
7/17/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-17-2022, 01:37 PM
A beautiful vignette!
Elastic
Pack your existence
in seventeen words, three ver-
ses and a haiku.
tailor STATELY
07-18-2022, 02:04 AM
Another Ars Poetica !... with enjambment !!! Love it !
a metal dirge
old possum records
content goldfish feasting on
drowning silverfish
7/17/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-18-2022, 01:40 PM
AI!
Faulty Haiku
objects abound, lie
around, when there will be a
sort of order?
tailor STATELY
07-18-2022, 03:20 PM
"Faulty Haiku" - lol... working on my mess for some time.
lament of the packrat
plenty familiar
old bills, cards, mathoms scattered
treasures 'suredly
7/18/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-19-2022, 02:33 PM
Mathoms
Past excursions
leave tinkering trails of
foreign landscapes.
tailor STATELY
07-20-2022, 02:49 AM
lol :)
dusky moon
a new dusky moon
sentinel - attends the night
clouds betray the stars
7/19/2022
Not tonight...
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-20-2022, 01:40 PM
Loved particularly the last verse
Shadows of warriors
Glide along the lake.
Water mirrors them.
tonywalt
07-20-2022, 04:03 PM
Loved particularly the last verse
Shadows of warriors
Glide along the lake.
Water mirrors them.
Great imagery.
tonywalt
07-20-2022, 04:10 PM
billions of people
but still i choose to sit here
(need to get some friends)
tailor STATELY
07-21-2022, 01:43 AM
:) Enjoyed both.
lame/limp (sprained my instep)
so dreadful afoot
sprain - an arduous hobbling
because of the pain
7/20/2022
life's afoot
all's afoot when all
is well - till pain takes you down
out of step with life
7/20/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-21-2022, 07:57 AM
Great imagery.
Thanks, Tony!
Danik 2016
07-21-2022, 08:01 AM
billions of people
but still i choose to sit here
(need to get some friends)
Maybe new people.
Friends, girls, the world is huge.
But don´t forget us.
Danik 2016
07-21-2022, 08:13 AM
double because of editing
Danik 2016
07-21-2022, 08:19 AM
Quote Originally Posted by tailor STATELY View Post
Enjoyed both.
lame/limp
(sprained my instep)
so dreadful afoot
sprain - an arduous hobbling
because of the pain
7/20/2022
life's afoot
all's afoot when all
is well - till pain takes you down
out of step with life
7/20/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Oh my! That sounds real. Didn´t enjoy the content but appreciated the humor!
An injured foot
demands tender attention.
Ice, pillow and rest.
https://www.drugs.com/health-guide/foot-sprain.html
#Stay home as much as you can and stay well
tailor STATELY
07-22-2022, 06:26 AM
Yes, unfortunately real. All I was doing was walking in a store when I felt something like a pop... X-rays negative so just a ligament in my instep that decided to act up. $90 USD later I was good to go with a foot wrap and OTC meds and Lidocaine patch. Wish I could be inactive... stuff to do.
rainclouds
just beyond the pale
mischievous rainclouds survey
glistening rooftops
7/22/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-22-2022, 01:36 PM
Good that you were x-rayed and medicated immediately. The feet represent the independence of so young people as we. Wish you a quick recover.
A charming poem
The Horizon
Always receding
the limit of future dreams.
Reverie beckons.
tailor STATELY
07-22-2022, 03:11 PM
So true... Thanx ! Beautiful Haiku :)
remorse
with hope remorse fades
to rest from view the long night
and balance restored
7/22/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-25-2022, 03:09 AM
time spent
somehow weathered all
in sylvan humility
my golden years blest
7/24/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-25-2022, 02:12 PM
Beautiful!
To all dying cats
Nothing will replace
your unique fluffiness,
and exuberance.
tailor STATELY
07-26-2022, 07:29 AM
So true... :(
deadpan dear
magical foothills
deadpan deer alertly pose
when trespassed upon
7/26/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-26-2022, 09:47 AM
Liked the wordplay!
Summerly winter
stretches its lethargic limbs.
The sun yawns slyly.
tailor STATELY
07-26-2022, 08:26 PM
A moderate winter must be a blessing :)
crimson
crimson sundown wanes
surreal pillow-clouds race the
psychedelic night
7/26/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-27-2022, 02:36 PM
Enjoyed the vignette
Damaged haiku
Tongues of fire
crack open the womb of the
pregnant earth!
tailor STATELY
07-27-2022, 05:45 PM
Cataclysmic ! Staying with the theme...
upheavals
living ring of fire
earth's upheavals terrorize
crushing tragedies
7/27/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
07-30-2022, 03:29 AM
come what may
night advanced slowly
a heavy galactic sleep
awaits the forlorn
7/30/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
07-30-2022, 09:26 AM
Still hoping for better times and sound sleep!
Whatever is up
nature rears flowers to cu-
re indifferences!
tailor STATELY
08-04-2022, 04:30 AM
(me too) Interesting structure... Nice sentiment to balance these times :)
jwst
blazing quietly
stars seek our vision; feeds
imagination
8/4/2022
https://webb.nasa.gov/
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-04-2022, 09:59 AM
Enjoyed the poem and Cartwheel Galaxy.
Meteorites
Mysterious, brilliant
envoys from outer spheres
What is your message?
https://www.cnnbrasil.com.br/nacional/meteoro-superbrilhante-e-visto-em-sao-paulo-e-minas-gerais/(about a meteorite that was sighted in several cities of S. Paulo yesterday)
tailor STATELY
08-05-2022, 07:10 AM
(Oh-Oh. O que você procura não está mais disponível. Que tal visitar nossa home ou buscar algum assunto?) :(
... did find this: https://westobserver.com/news/latin-america/superbright-meteor-seen-in-sao-paulo-and-minas-gerais/ Magnitude of -8 !
Enjoyed your Haiku :)
pardon our interruption
the building blocks of
planetary construction
asteroids, comets
8/5/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-05-2022, 04:47 PM
Yes, it is this one, I couldn´t find anything in English." Some translation problems though: "When he approached, the pressure increased and he exploded in the girls."
Enjoyed the Haiku!
Intergalactic
craziness! Explosions!
But calm reigns supreme!
tailor STATELY
08-05-2022, 07:50 PM
Translation... lol
Enjoyed... reminds me of the calm the Vogons had when they destroyed Earth... ref: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Hitchhiker%27s_Guide_to_the_Galaxy
"... and I feel fine"
dread end of the world
at first asteroids whisk by
then comes the big boom
8/5/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-06-2022, 12:56 PM
Sniff!
Finally with cc in English: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st5qroQvnT8
Much talk around the
end of the world. What about
a new beginning?
tailor STATELY
08-06-2022, 05:09 PM
Great video ! Optimistic Haiku :)
"... here's to the new boss"
beings are planning
a new beginning, but not
homo sapiens
8/6/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-08-2022, 07:30 AM
august rain
an august surprise
monsoon clouds bestowed light rains
upon parched foothills
8/8/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-08-2022, 10:04 AM
Enjoyed your vignette
Clouded Morning
Gray monotony.
The sky mirrors itself in
the drying puddles.
tailor STATELY
08-09-2022, 07:57 AM
Glad it's drying up :)
a skunk
a skunk passed by home
in the dark of night unseen
made its presence known
8/9/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-09-2022, 08:42 AM
Lol!
An magic instant
A prying bird, hops
on the window sill its black
eyes roam. It departs.
tailor STATELY
08-09-2022, 09:08 AM
re: a skunk... true story: this morning about 3:00 am while trying to cool the house down with window open.
Love it :)
the mantis
humid afternoon
alert green mantis praying,
swaying, saying grace
8/9/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-10-2022, 09:35 PM
tranquility
suggestively lithe
lightly breezed tree limbs swaying
sows tranquility
8/10/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-11-2022, 09:14 AM
Enjoyed both poems. In Portuguese the mantis is called Louva-Deus (praise God!)
Winter day
Patches of cold sun,
Heaven wearing a hesi-
tant blue! Harmony!
tailor STATELY
08-12-2022, 06:03 AM
Enjoyed both poems. In Portuguese the mantis is called Louva-Deus (praise God!)
Winter day
Patches of cold sun,
Heaven wearing a hesi-
tant blue! Harmony!
"Louva-Deus"... much better than Praying Mantis :)
Enjoyed you Haiku very much: "Heaven wearing a hesi-
tant blue!"
... back soon
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-12-2022, 07:38 AM
sturionic supermoon
bright supermoon beams
a pine martin's eyes glow bright
whilst skunks scamper near
8/12/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-12-2022, 08:19 AM
Enjoyed!
Urban night
The coldest of moons,
Noisy neighbors hover around
Dog howls can be heard.
tailor STATELY
08-13-2022, 07:12 AM
"The coldest of moons,"... great first line - enjoyed your Haiku :)
crickets
cool down mid of night
crickets chirp rapid cadence
full moon, dim lit stars
8/13/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-14-2022, 12:29 AM
moon færies... an ekphrastic haiku
cold pale moon rising
færies dance midst water mists
midsummer night's eve
https://www.starmythworld.com/mathisencorollary/2018/7/1/lvalek-or-the-dancing-fairies-by-august-malmstrm
8/13/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-14-2022, 11:15 AM
Enjoyed both moon Haikus and the painting is pure magic, thanks for the link( still have to finish reading the comment)!
Sunday noon
Frolicking dogs bark
happily; humans en-
grossed by their cells.
tailor STATELY
08-15-2022, 09:01 AM
An interesting commentary on the new age... enjoyed.
'bout an hour ago...
monday morn
monday morn so black
stars prevail - no hint of dawn
before gegenschein
8/15/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-15-2022, 09:21 AM
Oh!
Gegenschein,
Sleepless nights,
a lit window opposite
brings morning relief.
tailor STATELY
08-15-2022, 09:30 AM
Very nice ! I can relate...
sunrise!
sunrise ! a new day
dawned just now, soft blue skies - I
turn my thoughts to sleep
8/15/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
08-16-2022, 04:40 AM
mosses/lichen
mosses mingle 'neath
old man's beard and witch's hair
draped on dank tree limbs
8/16/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-16-2022, 08:04 AM
Enjoyed both haikus specially the last one.
Ghosts
White weird shapes
people the night. The sun re-
veals harmless blankets.
tailor STATELY
08-17-2022, 06:44 AM
Them ghosts is tricksy !
apparitions
chilly eventide
dank apparitions go bump
in the night - seeking
8/17/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-18-2022, 09:47 AM
Ja!
Nightly unruly
shapes? The sun brings them out
with light, life, colors!
tailor STATELY
08-19-2022, 01:20 AM
With light, life :)
hidden by hedgerows
hidden by hedgerows
færies sing in the dawning
magic light of day
8/18/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-19-2022, 10:02 AM
Magical! :)
Drizzle
Soaked landscapes!
Dusty nature retires,
choses new garments
tailor STATELY
08-20-2022, 04:24 AM
:) Dusty here.
heatwave
scorching summertime
a living heatwave simmers
wavelength uncertain
8/20/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-20-2022, 08:34 AM
Cold spell
The chill extends its
damp fingers. Morning sun tries
to break the grim spell.
tailor STATELY
08-21-2022, 01:06 AM
brrrr !
emerald memories
bright green sea lettuce
makes for vibrant emerald waves
break upon the shore
8/20/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-28-2022, 08:39 AM
:)
Sun Day
Soft, familiar noi-
ses erasing tumults of
every day life.
tailor STATELY
08-29-2022, 04:01 AM
Very serene :)
serene
soon after midnight
crickets happily chirping
peaceful reflections
8/29/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-29-2022, 07:09 AM
Enjoyed! :)
Rain
Softly immersed
in water, the world looks small.
Bird songs persevere!
tailor STATELY
08-30-2022, 06:35 AM
Very nice :)
mirror mare
double reflection
stars glide in a fantasy
moonlight sonata
8/30/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-30-2022, 04:46 PM
Loved it!
Winter
Cold flying fingers
grasp the air. The sun is just
kind of ornament.
tailor STATELY
08-31-2022, 03:15 AM
I envy your winter; we're set for a heat wave: https://weather.com/weather/tenday/l/Garden+Valley+CA?canonicalCityId=15fe24f909cd9a5de 1cc11fef53d35d972f77e971f53a86d6c470ce44ebd8182
heat wave
no need to fly high
as Icarus to his doom
fierce our home star
8/31/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
08-31-2022, 03:47 PM
It looks bad, specially as the grades are in Fº. A German digital friend told me they had 32ºC there yesterday.
But the heat wave is bound to come soon. Probably in spring as the coldest month this year here was May.
Climate Change (damaged haiku)
Cold waves in Autumn
Heat in Spring. What has become
Of Summer and Winter?
tailor STATELY
09-02-2022, 08:18 AM
Yes, prolly climate changes... 32º C / 89.6º F is warm enough for me... 'tis 78º F at 5:00 am indoors with the window open just now.
green bananas
bananas too green
such a heavy snack to eat
more pithy than sweet
9/2/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-02-2022, 02:23 PM
LoL! Here people use to wrap them in newspaper for a quicker maturing.
Fruits thrive briskly
under the kiss of the sun.
Tiny birds rejoice.
tailor STATELY
09-03-2022, 03:27 AM
:)
thirst
sweltering sundown
ruby hummingbird flivvers
in search of water
9/3/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-04-2022, 12:30 PM
Enjoying with warm tea
tailor STATELY
09-06-2022, 06:12 AM
lake havasu haboob
surprise dust storm comes
an impromptu haboob, with
lightning in the wind
9/6/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-06-2022, 04:09 PM
Enjoyed!
Independence day( tomorrow)
Twohundred years of
independence. Have we
reaped war or peace?
tailor STATELY
09-06-2022, 07:21 PM
Thanx... a recent event where my wife is vacationing... she thought a tornado was coming from the signs in the sky :)
Enjoyed your poem. Hoping for peace; the people of Brasil are resilient !
fahrenheit rising
fahrenheit rising
now 1-0-7 outdoors
97 in
9/6/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-07-2022, 08:43 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Tailor! It´s not quite sure if anything is going to happen today, St Peter sent rain, which is fine. Hope your wife is well under shelter, they are no joke this tornados.
Enjoyed the poem but not the temperature!
Rainy Celebrations (damaged haiku)
A rare rain shrouds
the so active city.
Melancholy!
tailor STATELY
09-07-2022, 12:08 PM
No tornados (thank heavens)... just an 80 mile/129 km long (on some reports) curtain of dust/sand storm generating its own lightning... wish I'd seen it :)
Pondered your poem after reading prognostications for your holiday earlier today...
muffle
rain may damp spirits
yet muffle mischievousness
where hooligans roam
9/7/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-07-2022, 02:00 PM
:) Military parades, but so far all seems calm.
Soldiers parade
attired in red and gold.
Is this still Brazil?
tailor STATELY
09-08-2022, 06:26 AM
Glad to hear :) Red and gold sounds like a good combination.
mosquito fire 3 am
smoke is in the air
ashes slowly drifting down
settling everywhere
9/8/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-08-2022, 08:56 AM
Heard about it in the news. Hopefully it will be extinguished soon and won´t reach your area
The day after the holyday
A hesitant sun
is back. Thursday or Monday
morning? Calmness reigns!
tailor STATELY
09-18-2022, 12:55 AM
:)
We're still safe with an evacuation warning... people have started to go to their homes as mandatory evacuations are being lifted here and there. Rain in the forecast :)
mosquito fire 2022
evac warnings still
safe as rain in the forecast
fire rages near
9/17/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-18-2022, 08:41 PM
Why is it called Mosquito fire?
Water against fire
Devastating flames!
Rain cures the open wounds
of the soil. New life!
tailor STATELY
09-19-2022, 07:39 AM
Mosquito fire:
The fire began at approximately 6:27 PM PDT on September 6, 2022, near Mosquito Ridge Road (for which it was named), above Oxbow Reservoir in the Middle Fork American River drainage on the western slope of the Sierra Nevada.... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mosquito_Fire
Love the optimism of new life !
reine
blessed angels dance as
Terpsichore plays her lyre
flames gaze at rainbows
9/19/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-21-2022, 12:24 PM
Magical!
Rainy Spring Day
The sun smiles lightly
attired in grumpy clouds.
Earth sulks below.
tailor STATELY
09-21-2022, 07:07 PM
Wonderful contrast of moods :)
late summer reigns
a hummingbird sips
from ivy on a rapt oak
intermittent rain
9/21/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-22-2022, 01:55 PM
A cute vignette!
The Protagonist
He sings at the first
hint of dawn and all day long,
His heart in his throat!
tailor STATELY
09-23-2022, 07:06 AM
Very nice :)
autumn's appearance
autumn's appearance
showcases sierra clouds
out in the distance
9/23/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-26-2022, 02:12 PM
Liked it :)
Spring rain
Welcome waters
of September. heralding
flowery seasons.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UIckBQ2DXQ4
tailor STATELY
09-26-2022, 02:44 PM
Enjoyed... Beautiful flowers :) ... enjoy your spring.
gracious early fall
gracious early fall
summer yet to loose her grip
despite the light breeze
9/25/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-27-2022, 09:09 AM
Thanks!
Dentist
Friendliness, unsus-
picious looking machine.
Teeth don´t enjoy it!
tailor STATELY
09-27-2022, 01:14 PM
Ai !
Pantanal
jaguars hunt caiman
stoic capybaras gaze
adopt a macaw
9/27/2022
ref: https://www.worldwildlife.org/stories/5-interesting-facts-about-the-pantanal-the-world-s-largest-tropical-wetland
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-27-2022, 02:52 PM
Thanks for the link, tailor. Sadly the wet areas have been turned into dry areas in the last years with fires raging like in California. The difference is, that most of these areas seem to be inhabited by wildlife and birds but hardly by men. This video was shot in 2012. Things have gone much worde since then:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xYJ5isWlkbY
Quagmire
Wild waters recede
on flatlands abandoned
by shrinking wildlife.
tailor STATELY
09-28-2022, 01:12 AM
So sorry to hear :(
droughts
I hear the laments
as far watercourses sigh
stars withhold their tears
9/27/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
09-30-2022, 12:43 AM
I was amazed today at the number of honey bees, and a few bumblebees et al, busying themselves on the much maligned Yellow StarThistle... http://southwestdesertflora.com/WebsiteFolders/All_Species/Asteraceae/Centaurea%20solstitialis,%20Yellow%20Star-thistle.html
late september's buzz
lowly starthistles
reign with bright yellow florets
virtue bees extol
9/29/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
09-30-2022, 10:14 AM
Maybe they have less food choices, what with fires and other accidents that devastate the plants.
Bumble, bumble bee,
what kind of flower dishes
Nature has for thee?
tailor STATELY
09-30-2022, 03:19 PM
:) Soon there will be fewer choices for the bees (sigh).
a pity the plant is so invasive & harmful otherwise
from my brief study
upon the web; starthistle
honey highly prized
9/30/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
10-09-2022, 05:31 AM
nefelibata
dance to the beat of
your soul; let the heart follow
harmoniously
10/9/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
10-09-2022, 08:08 AM
:):)
Slept enough tonight. Hoping for positive impact on versification!
Sun Day!
If the day is bright
let the light come in! Revel
in radiance.
tailor STATELY
10-13-2022, 03:07 AM
Wonderful :)
my love sleeps
even falls heavy
the discomforted sleeps; a
sound of sawing logs
10/13/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
10-15-2022, 01:26 PM
:)
Lazy afternoon
Sleepiness is in
the air with people gently
falling asleep z!
tailor STATELY
10-15-2022, 02:35 PM
:)
saturday
tranquil green leaves wave
a makeshift birdbath invites
late serene morning
10/15/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
10-26-2022, 05:31 AM
wood smoke
the wood stove is stoked
an old iron misfit black
leaks and chuffs sometimes
10/26/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
10-26-2022, 07:29 AM
Enjoyed both last haikus, specially Saturday!
Wednesdays
Walking to workplace
Mornings dogging on
Evening football
tailor STATELY
10-27-2022, 03:04 AM
Busy schedule :)
a driving day
cool clear afternoon
lazy wednesday rendezvous
putting on the mile$
10/26/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
10-29-2022, 12:46 AM
Damascus
my brakes are grinding
wake up and smell the coffee
Damascus must wait
10/28/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
11-09-2022, 08:53 AM
buffering
darkest before dawn
beyond internet's set cap
buffering balloons
11/9/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
11-29-2022, 06:57 PM
fall advanced quickly
fall advanced quickly
awaiting the perfect rime
clear bright air whispers
11/29/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
11-29-2022, 10:16 PM
Enjoyed!
Stormy days
Clouds spin a dark rug
Water pours down from heaven.
Puddles grace the soil!
tailor STATELY
12-01-2022, 08:54 AM
Love this: "Clouds spin a dark rug" :)
inclement weather
changeable foothills
robins are hunkering down
woodpiles diminish
12/1/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
12-01-2022, 09:41 AM
:)
Friendly morning air
Planes think themselves big birds
Beaming sunshine prevails.
tailor STATELY
12-02-2022, 09:34 AM
Enjoyed :)
iridian hopes
trying to keep bright
in a time of affliction
iridian hopes
12/2/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
12-02-2022, 03:50 PM
Loku
Clouds
Clouds have silver
linings, hide the friendly sun
and father rainbows!
tailor STATELY
12-02-2022, 07:09 PM
Cheerful Loku ! My previous attempt (#732) started out in a more negative vane: dreary day blah blues/gray cloudy disposition/more of same forecast... but I decided to turn my frown upside down :)
færies (revisited)
sunny afternoon
I ponder færies at mirth
I muse reposing
12/2/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
12-15-2022, 02:03 AM
winter's nigh
a light chill wind blows
just a week before winter
penetrates the bones
12/14/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
12-15-2022, 07:15 AM
Respite
Birds welcome the cold
A day of sunny respite
among heat waves.
tailor STATELY
12-16-2022, 12:26 AM
Enjoyed :) Your weather must be nice.
awaiting moonrise
fog upon my breath
stars so bright in the sharp air
awaiting moonrise
12/15/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
01-22-2023, 04:48 AM
derecho
fox squirrel beneath
clutching an oak's bole closely
greenish glowing sky
1/22/2023
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
01-22-2023, 08:17 AM
Thanks, tailor. Was thinking of resurrecting this thread.
Atmospheric Haiku!
Summer Sunday
Just the synchronized
bark of the parading dogs
and the glaring sun!
tailor STATELY
01-23-2023, 10:01 AM
Delightful :)
sublime as poets
sublime as poets
secrets of bucolic soul
listen to the bees
1/23/2023
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY
01-29-2023, 04:35 AM
at play
playful shadows ran
through whispers in the garden
outrun by children
1/29/2023
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
01-29-2023, 08:31 AM
Charming Haikus, specially the last one! Was thinking of ressurecting this page.
Sundaying
A glorious sunshine
Spills its warm glow on the plain.
Lazy peace abounds
tailor STATELY
01-30-2023, 07:13 AM
Enjoyed :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
02-01-2023, 09:36 AM
Umbrella
A bird takes the word
under his powerful wings.
Small beings abound!
tailor STATELY
02-01-2023, 06:32 PM
Quite evocative... enjoyed :)
roll along winter
roll along winter
bare oaks and melancholy
may spring be recalled
2/1/2023
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
02-02-2023, 08:38 AM
Hoping for an early spring/autumn
Sample of urban summer
Heat, rain,massive floods!
Avenues turned in-
to gushing rivers!
tailor STATELY
02-04-2023, 06:26 AM
:( Except for the heat that has been our winter.
wintertime blues
pitch perfect frogs sing
basal musicality
wintertime blues blare
2/4/2023
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
02-04-2023, 09:47 AM
Charming!
A Grey Summer
Summer without sun
Almost! Grey rays cut the heat.
Apathy prevails.
tailor STATELY
02-04-2023, 07:02 PM
Enjoyed :) Prompted me thus:
no rime
gray blankets our hills
a respite from winter's bite
from the cold of space
2/4/2023
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Danik 2016
02-05-2023, 08:39 AM
Loved the image of the blanket!
Sun and rain dance
an alternate Tango!
Birds sing airily!
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