Moonlight Madness of the Werewolf

[Phoenix_Tears]

I can't escape you
Though the moon knows i try
Many a night
She watches me cry
She's cast her light on my wounds
And then sends the rain
Trying her damndest
To wash away my pain
She guards my fears
Making sure they linger
just beyond the border of my mind
Misguiding those of my kind
Seeking me out
Hearing my soul's cry
She keeps them from coming
to help me die
I hate her sometimes
When the darkness retreats
i feel the intense defeat
I lock my window in a shrowd of curtains
To keep out her glare
I hate her sometimes
Keeping death just on the brink
She knows of the red, clogging my sink
She never forgets to let me see
My mirror
Curse of my eternity
Self contradiction
For i love her as well
Guarding me from the fires of hell
The only thing between
me and satan's lot
So many lessons she had me taught
Under her light
I've stolen away
Only to return
Before the breaking day
Under her light
I've dreamt of my love
Before i break the surface of the living
I hate her
I love her not
I cannot bear her
She is all i got

[WX6[ck]]

Great poem, like the last four lines. If thats how yoou feel, dont come to denmark we see the moon 24 hours a day :D

[that kid]

i like this peom too. i really love the last 4 lines....i would say those could stand as a poem by themselves. would you be adverse to a little constructive critisicm?

[Phoenix_Tears]

yes

[Phoenix_Tears]

i know "got" isnt fitting for the last line, but i liked it better than have. and it rhymed, so i liked the flow

[bbq13]

hehe... denmark... maybe i should go there someday...