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tonywalt
08-07-2020, 08:43 AM
You are alive
and reading this

Now close your eyes.
I am there
under your lids
in the darkness.

AuntShecky
08-08-2020, 03:08 PM
Don't drown in my cataracts. Oh, I kid, I kid.

Actually, this piece isn't bad, and that goes for the short poem posted after this one.

Danik 2016
08-09-2020, 11:59 AM
I liked this exceedingly. Good poetry has this gift of making the not thought of sound natural.

tonywalt
08-11-2020, 10:25 AM
I liked this exceedingly. Good poetry has this gift of making the not thought of sound natural.

Thanks Danik!

WolfLarsen
09-08-2020, 12:13 PM
This is creepy in a great way!

tonywalt
09-21-2020, 10:44 PM
Thanks!