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Twota
02-21-2020, 04:27 PM
A flock of brazen birds beguiled
The nature of the skies: the clouds
Were billows of smothering sand,
And the sun a smoldering coin;
The angels drowned in sickly seas –
Above trees anemic and bland.
The rain was no rain, but hail
Of feather and stone. And mankind,
Beaten blind, crept on knee and hand.

Danik 2016
02-22-2020, 06:32 AM
Have been enjoying your poems, Twota. Original, precise images.

Twota
02-22-2020, 08:45 AM
I am glad to hear. :D Thank you, Danik.

tailor STATELY
05-04-2020, 12:01 PM
You painted an incredible vision...

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Buh4Bee
05-04-2020, 05:38 PM
Is this what comes after Covid? Thank you for sharing. You have some dark imagery here.