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    Cool Chapter 5 part 3

    Susan was stunned by the rough behavior coming from someone so nice like Emerald. The best thing to do was get out of her way and that’s what she did. She walked up to the cafeteria and found a place beside Julia. Julia looked up from her book and stared at Susan. “Hi”, Suzie greeted her. “Well, what do you want?”, Julia asked.
    “Em, I, I was just wondering if I could sit here and talk to you”, Susan tried to smile.
    “ Your already sitting here and I have no problem with it and since we started why don’t we keep talking”, she said and they both started laughing.
    “I’m Susan and if I remember from our last activity your Julia”, she introduced herself.
    “ It’s me, nice to meet you… Wait your parents own a zoo, I went there once”, she exclaimed.
    “ Yeah but it’s no big deal, all they do is breed endangered animals and stuff. They are really into helping the environment and I think I got that after them. My mum was a professor and my dad is a vet, they are brilliant together but to be honest they are so busy saving the world they barely notice me.” She explained.
    “I guess we aren’t so different and I totally understand you, my mum is a professor too and my dad was a forest ranger. When they got into cryptozoology they went to travel the world looking for monsters and forgot I existed.” Julia compared herself to her new found friend.
    “Isn’t it impossible, you know stuff like big foot or Nessie”, Susan asked.
    “Well not really, it’s…”, but before she could explain Primrose came into the cafeteria and called for Julia.
    “Got to go bye, I knew this would happen when I said my parents were monster hunters. Anna is expecting me but if you want to find out more hide in the bush beside the hut and listen to the conversation it might explain a lot.”
    She followed the art teacher and left. Curiosity killed the cat Susan kept repeating to herself. Even though she knew it was a bad thing to do she followed them quietly. Minding her step and when she saw the wooden hut she crept along the trees and hid in an overgrown bush near the open window.
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    Lightbulb Chapter 6 part 1

    The door opened, Primrose and Julia went inside the room. Anna, Topaz and a masculine man were already inside all looking at Julia. Nothing changed in the room since Suzie was there with her dad except a vase of fresh flowers stood on the table and a dog lied on the carpet. It was a cute little black Russian Terrier and it was asleep. Anna got up and closed the curtains but Susan could still heat everything.
    Break ended and Abigail put on her lip-gloss. You never know when a cute boy comes around, better to be always ready, she said to herself and walked out to the campfire not knowing how right she was. Suddenly Erika passed her and so did Lila and her friend overtook her and so did some other people. They all (except Erika) seemed very excited, probably because it was time for their activity with Anna. Of course Abi took her time because she wasn’t very optimistic about the lesson. But Anna never showed up because she was at a “meeting”. Instead of her came a tan boy with dark blue eyes and full lips. Hot!!! , that was the only way she could describe him and she was happy she put on her lip-gloss. Abi turned 15 not so long ago and had a few boyfriends since then but none of them were half as handsome as the boy in front of her. The guy turned out to be a 16 year old camp worker Aeron. Rumors that quickly spread when the girls saw him said that he was the one that wears the monster costume but Abigail couldn’t quite believe someone with a face as cute as his could hide it under a fake monster head.
    “ Hello my name is Aeron and I’m a maintenance worker here, because Anna has something important to do I will take care of you today. I am quite sure Anna will accompany you tomorrow”, he said in a gentle voice, “Is everyone here?” He looked around at the girls smiling and noticed they were all shaking their heads. “The girl from our hut is gone her name is Julia.” Said a small girl.
    “And so is Susan but she felt sick and went to the hut to lie down”, Erika lied just like Susan asked her to. She wasn’t sure why she agreed but lately Erika wasn’t sure of anything. “Well I know about Julia and I hope Susan feels better later”, he said.
    They did archery, something that Abigail like at many things was not very good at. She was scared that she might shot someone. She was de-concentrated and shock with fear but when she tried it she was amazed. Her very first shot hit the target right in the middle without killing anyone. She saw that Aeron was impressed and felt very happy with herself. I think I can start liking this camp she thought looking in his direction. The afternoon was brilliant and everyone even Erika liked archery.
    the pen is mightier than the sword

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