Originally Posted by
DieterM
Just wanted to stop by and say hallo and welcome. I already read some of your other poems but couldn't find them really poetic. More like flash-fiction prose, I'd say. But I saw your longer piece in the short story section and found it somewhat more accomplished. What I didn't get, though, is why you'd want to post these snippets in 2 languages. Especially as your knowledge of English seems to be rather good but the German texts read as if translated by Goodle Translation (when Google Translation has a bad day. I'm Austrian btw and, don't ask me why, can overlook mistakes in English or French texts, but when I see them in German, I have a kind of unwholesome reaction, lol). And be aware of Sheherezade—her avatar pic shows very well what she does to trespassers (*shivers with delightful anticipation*).